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Guangzhou is a modern city with 2000 years history. There are different cultures in different places in the city. You will be amazed by that colourful cultures. The famous shopping views in Guangzhou are Teemall and Shang xia jiuCommercial Pedestrian Street ----one is a modern shopping centre, the other is one of the oldest streets in Guangzhou. They are quite different. In Teemall, you can see many modern entertainment facilities, for example, you can play the video games and play bumper car in it. If you want to do some shopping, you can go into some shops.There are full of latest fashions, and you can buy some daily necessities in the supermarket. Sometimes you will find some cheap ones if you are lucky. When you feel hungry, you can go to a restaurant to eat some delicious food. However, when you walk on Shangxiajiu Commercial Pedestrian Street, it is a big culture shock for you.Walking pass and you well see many old buildings on both side of the streets. These buildings were builded in 1930s.They show you what was old Guangzhou like. There are man small shops on the first floor of the building.They sell some interesting and traditional commodities. And you can try some dim-sum----the famous and delicious food in Guangzhou. You will like it.
Guangzhou is a modern city with 2000 years history ï¼a history of 2000 yearsï¼. There are different cultures in different places in the city.( Different areas in this city have different cultures.) You will be amazed by that colourful (the variety of )cultures. The famous shopping views(places) in Guangzhou are Teemall and Shang xia jiu Commercial Pedestrian Street ----(the former )one is a modern shopping centre, the (later one) other is one of the oldest streets in Guangzhou. They are quite different. In Teemall, you can see many modern entertainment facilities, for example, you can play the video games and play bumper car in it. If you want to do some shopping, you can go into some shops, (thousands of shops would meet your needs) There are full of latest fashions, and you can buy some daily necessities in the supermarket. Sometimes you will find some cheap ones if you are lucky. When you feel hungry, you can go to a restaurant to eat some delicious food. However, when you walk on Shangxiajiu Commercial Pedestrian Street, it is a big culture shock for you.Walking pass (the street) and you well(will) see many old buildings on both side(sides) of the streets. These buildings were builded in (the)1930s.They show you what was (the)old Guangzhou like. There are man (many) small shops on the first floor of the building.They sell some interesting and traditional commodities. And you can try some dim-sum----the famous and delicious food in Guangzhou. You will like it.