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Question

After more than 3000 years’ evolution, theChinese garden has become a unique landscape. It includes both the large gardenbuilt for royal members’ amusement and the private garden built for scholars,businessmen and retired government officials who want to get rid of the noisyouter world. These gardens have constituted a sort of tiny landscape that ismeant to express the due harmonious relationship between man and nature. Thetypical Chinese garden is surrounded by the wall and consisted of ponds,rockwork, trees, flowers, grass and the various kinds of architecture that arelinked by winding roads and aisles. Walking in the garden, People can see aseries of well-designed landscape like landscape painting scroll showing in theface of us.

Answer 1

After more than 3000 years’ evolution, theChinese garden has become a unique landscape. It includes both the large garden built for royal members’ amusement and the private garden built for scholars,businessmen and retired government officials who want to get rid of the noisy outer world. These gardens have constituted a sort of tiny landscape that is meant to express the due harmonious relationship between man and nature. The typical Chinese garden is surrounded by the wall and consisted of ponds,rockwork, trees, flowers, grass and the various kinds of architecture that are linked by winding roads and aisles. Walking in the garden, People can see a series of well-designed landscape like landscape painting scroll showing in the face of us.

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