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请帮忙翻译下面的那些中文做英文...我怕文法会不对><!!超急的..各位帮帮忙哦....!!!
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大家好..我的名字是ceci..我今年16岁和我的高度是162cm..我很喜欢交朋友.看书和听歌..
今天我会说一下在我心目中..我的白马王子是怎样的呢?
首先
我希望他的五官是深刻的..有著一头柔顺的金发
鼻子是高挺的和有一面迷人的笑容
要有180cm高..(我想至少要比我高)
但性格才是最重要的..
我希望我的白马王子是一个..友善的..有爱心的..孝顺的
是一个爱看书..爱小孩子有爱心的男孩..
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以上的...我明天要考了><!请大家帮我翻译和看下有没有甚麼要改的...
那..可不可以改成是..有学识的人呢@_@?

Answer 1

Hello,everyone.My name is Ceci.I'm 16 years old,162cm tall.I like making friends,reading and music...
I will talk about the Prince Charming that in my mind.So,how's the man?
First of all,I hope he has a clean-cut face,with soft and smooth golden hair.
With the high bridge of the nose and attractive smile.
180cm tall(I think at least taller than me)
But the character is the most important of all...
I hope he's a genial,loving,filial boy,and like reading,children,and with a loving herat.

PS.可以改,有学识的人 I hope he's a sciential man.我希望他是一个有学识的人.

Answer 2

Hello, everybody!! (口语就用这个)
My name is Ceci. I am 16years old and 162cm tall.
I like reading and music. I also like making friends.
Today I would like to tell you how my "Prince Charming" looks like in my mind.
First of all, I hope that he has sharp features with long nose and a charming smile. It will be perfect if he has smooth blond hair and 180cm tall...(at least taller than me)(这个地方可以笑,停顿一下)
But, character is the most important.
I hope that my "Prince Charming" is kind, generous, filial, and is a boy who loves reading as I am.
Thank you!

我在你的内容基础上更改了一下! 最后面我不提爱小孩子了. 前面已经说了他是善良的. 后面提小孩让人感觉你急着生小孩似的.