I always insist that educating is not about how rigorous or tolerant the parents should be, it is more concerned with the children’s own choice of their life.
您好,这句话包括一个大错误和若干小错误。 1)句子结构分析: 1、主语:I 2、谓语:insist on 3、宾语:that +从句1+that 从句2 2)首先,that引导宾语从句时,第一个宾语从句的that是可以省略的,其后的that是不可以省略的,那么这句话应该改成: I always insist on that +句1,that+句2 3)其中句1中的educating改成education,一般作主语,我们首选名词,而不是动名词 4)句2中,既然是孩子们的选择和他们的生活,那建议改成 children’s own choices of their lives 希望能帮到您