高人帮我看下这个句子对不对

Attending the training school for reemployment in our country has turned out to be a sort of prevalent trend with the unemployment rate increasing in these years.

这个句子有没有语法错误?
with the unemployment rate increasing 放在宾语后边合适吗?

With the unemployment rate increasing in these years,attending training school for reemployment in our country has turned out to be a sort of prevalent trend .
放在前面后面意思一样 但句子比较长 放在前面可读性好一些
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第1个回答  2011-01-10
随着近年来失业率的提高,为了再就业而参加培训学校已经成为我国一个普遍的趋势,这句话没有语法错误,with引导的是一个时间状语。
第2个回答  2011-01-10
有,不合适
第3个回答  2011-01-10
确实有,可能不合适
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