请将下面的英文修改一下，高分求英语高手修改，润色，改得好再加分。（急！！！！） 2天内回复再加20分

Question

可将修改好的直接打在下面，可以适量的增句删句，或者将我的话换成另一种说法。
加一些好词好句进里面
Some weeks ago, I had some 争执 with my mother. Because I think she is very boresome ,she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework, but I am so tired and I want to have a rest to play computer games. And she took care of me any time, she took care of me just like take care of a child. But I think I have grown up and I have ability to protect myself. I have been a man. She should let me alone.
Now, I adjust my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday, my mother went to work for a whole day. It means I must stay in the house alone for twelve hours. First I felt happy, I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter. However when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt 困扰. I can’t cook meal. I just ate some biscuits as my lunch. At that time, I really know my mother’s meals are delicious and I haven’t been away from my mother yet. I know my mother’s chatters are beneficial for me. I know my mother is really loving me too. Mothers are the most important person for us. Mother is the best person in the world.

Answer 1

Some weeks ago, I had some quarrel with my mother. Because I think she is very boresome ,she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework without the slightest consideration how tired I am or what I want to do. I'm a teenage, but not a machine. I need to relax myself after a whole day studying at school, and I think playing computer games is a good way to refresh myself. Besides, My mother takes care of me at all times, the way she treats me just like a little baby in mother's hands. However, I think I have grown up and have the ability to protect and care of myself. I eager my mother could give me the room of freedom and let me make the arrangement of my daily life.
However, one thing happened several days ago changed my attitude toward my mother.
On this Saturday, my mother went to work for a whole day. It means I must stay at home alone for twelve hours. I felt very happy at first time, I thought I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter. But, when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt anxious for I don't know how to cook. I had to eat some biscuits for my lunch. At that time, I realized the importance of my mother to me and how dilicious of the meals she cook. I am still a child and cannot be independent from my mother. At the same time, I understand all my mother does for me is for my sake (意思是：我妈妈做的一切都是为了我好. I know she love me heartfully. Mum, I love you too, I'm sorry for my misunderstanding of you before.

Answer 2

ask+s
争执 quarrel
I felt 困扰I can’t cook meal. 改成I began to have trouble in making meals.
just like take care of 这句应该是 just like taking care of

这个文章总体读起来有些怪怪的 有很多细节性的小错误，比如. Mothers are the most important person 这里的person指的是个体但你前面mother又加了s.还有就是尽量保证文章时态的大体一致不要一下现在时一下又过去时。建议你再多检查几遍 建议删掉一些比较中文式的句子，最好多浓缩一下。
总之整个文章读下来就是有种不专业的感觉。
所以要增减句子也真不是很容易，会有很突兀的感觉。

不过意思很清楚，加油，祝你成功。

Answer 3

A few weeks ago, I had a disagreement with my mother. Because I think she is very boresome .She always asks me to study hard and pushs me to do a lot of homework, but I am so tired . I want to take a rest to play computer games. What's more, she keeps watch on me any time. She keeps watch on me just like I am a little child . But I think I have grown up and I have ability to protect myself. I have become a man now . She should give me freedom.

But now, I have changed my attitude toward my mother.On this Saturday, my mother went to work for a whole day. It means I must stay in the house alone for twelve hours. First I felt so happy, I can enjoy the day without mother’s chatter. However, when it’s time to have lunch ,I felt puzzled. I don't know how to cook meal. So I jhave to just eat some biscuits as my lunch. At that time, I start to know that my mother’s meals are delicious .I know I can't be away from my mother yet. I know my mother’s chatters are beneficial for me. I also know my mother love me too. Mother is the most important person for us. Mother is the best person in the world.

Answer 4

she always ask me to work hard and do a lot of homework, 这句改为she always asks me to work hard and do a lot of homework, ask+s