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根据一项最新调查结果，95%的肥胖儿童喜欢吃快餐食品。近些年，一些大型洋快餐，比如麦当劳，肯德基在深受孩子们的喜爱，这些快餐食品给孩子们提供了美味的同时还给他们提供了高热量的食物，这些食物直接导致了孩子们增加体重，使他们变胖。

美国的一项调查认为肥胖与看电视密切相关。因为儿童在看电视时零食吃得较多，而且不活动。假设一个男孩每天看1小时电视，会降低热能消耗200千卡。 近年来，由于电脑的普及，和网络游戏的流行，也成为造成儿童肥胖的一个主要原因，由于儿童长期坐在电脑玩网络游戏，很少会像以前的孩子们一样外出玩耍，从而导致他们变胖

Answer 1

according to a latest survey, 95% of fat children love eating fast foods. in recent years, many western fast food stores have attracted young childrens in a large scale. these stores provide delicious foods as well as high calorific power，which directly cause the increase of children's weight and make them fat.
a survey in USA shows that fat is related to watching TV.when children are watching TV, they often eat much but have little exercise. suppose a boy watches TV for one hour every day, he will consume 200kccal power less than not. morden children spend a long time in sitting for computer games,and they don't play outside like the children in the past,therefore, they become fat easily.

Answer 2

as a new report said that 90% of the fat children like eating fast food. in recent year,children like some foreign fast food very much,like KFC,Mcdonald.This kind of fast food not only provide children daintiness but also high calorie.The food lead to putting on weight,and make the children become fatter.

an american survey said that there is a close relation between fat and watching TV.Beause children ofen eat too much sock when watching TV,and they take no activity.If a boy watches TV one hour per day,it'll reduce the thermal energy consumption by 200 therm. recent year,as the computers are widely used, and the internet game is becoming popular,it also make the children fat.Because the children sit before the computer and play internet games for a long time, eren they don't go out for playing like before,children are become fatter.