请看下面这句英语语法有什么不对么?请纠正下,谢谢!!!!!!

this is what I have heard so far the most happy discourse is the most beautiful words now, so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy, and inspires me forward!
“只要我累了,渴了,饿了,我就会想起你”,这是我迄今为止听到最幸福的话语也是最美好的话语,因此我感到我很幸福,它给了我正能量,激励着我前进!
这个原话,谢谢!

首先,happy的最高级是the happiest,而不是the most happy
然后,第一句最好去掉this is,去掉后便是一个完整的句子主谓宾都齐全,不去则结构混乱了
接着,what与the happiest discourse结构重复了
所以,我觉得要改为:
The happiest discourse (that) I have heard so far is the most beautiful words now, so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy, and inspires me forward!
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第1个回答  2013-07-05
This is what I have heard so far, the happiest discourse is the most beautiful words now, so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy, and inspires me to go forward!

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鉴于你的补充语句需要改一下
This is the happiest and the most beautiful words I heard so far, so I feel that I am so happy. It gave me positive power/energy and inspire me to go forward.追问

请问,不可以用gives 吗?为什么要用gave?还有 我觉得假如你前面写成gave的话,后面的inspire应该变成inspired,对么
对此,我认为,还是用一般现在时的好,。、,。、我说的这句话,是对现在或将来的描述,而不是过去,

谢谢您的回答!

追答

着急就这样,这个我疏忽了我经常犯时态的错误 前后不统一 呵呵。
我改一下 前面要改成 I have heard so far. 鉴于这里用完成时。
如果将这句话是说过了。 用过去式可以。
如果客观讲这句话对你产生的影响,那么一般现在时也没问题。

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This is the happiest discourse and the most beautiful words I have heard so far, so I feel that I am so happy. It gives me positive power/energy and inspires me to go forward.

这样对了吧,再回答一次呗,谢谢!

我会给你分的!

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可以 power 和 energy 你选一个

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第2个回答  2013-07-05
It is the most beautiful words that I have heard so far for the most happy discourse, so It makes very happy with positive energy and great inspiration.

仅供参考,望能帮助到你,呵呵!追问

谢谢您的修改!但与我的本句意思稍有偏差,不过还是谢谢你了!!!!!!thank you!

第3个回答  2013-07-05
When I felt tired, thirsty, hungry, I thought of you, this is the most happiest and beautiful discourse that I have ever heard. I feel very happy, it give me positive energy and inspires me forward.追问

额,谢谢你,sorry,但你猜想错了,谢谢!

追答

见更新

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请问,是不是应该把most去掉?happy的最高级是the happiest,而不是the most happy,对么?还有,您的give 是不是应该加s

追答

When I felt tired, thirsty, hungry, I thought of you, this is the happiest and most beautiful discourse that I have ever heard. I feel very happy, it gives me positive energy and inspires me forward.

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谢谢了thank you very much!

第4个回答  2013-07-05
"I will always think of you whenever I am tired, thirsty or hungry" --- it is the happiest and most beautiful words I have ever heard so far, which make me very happy. It gives me positive energy and inspires me forward.追问

which make / make后不需要加s吗?

追答

需要加s,疏忽了。

追问

哦哦,好的,谢谢您!

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