英语作文，帮忙看看有什么语法错误？

Question

If I had a pen of Ma Liang,I would draw a forest where a lot of animals could live by happy way to grow up.
If I had a pen of Ma Liang,I would draw a warm sun which makes some birds attempt to travel the north while no longer so hard regularly aim to fly to the south.
If I had a pen of Ma Liang,I would draw lots of clothes and food for children who suffer disaster and pain in order that they could feel the beauty of life and face life with confidence.
I wish I had a pen of Ma Liang,which can help me to bring hope to others.What I want to do is that I could assist others realize many people’s dream when they no longer looking forward to the future or have little hope.

Answer 1

第一：if 条件句的时态搭配
1.if从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时
2.if从句用一般现在时，主句用may/might/canIf the fog gets thicker the plane may/might be diverted.
3.if从句用一般现在时，主句用must/shouldIf you want to lose weight you must/should eat less bread.
4.if从句用一般现在时，主句用一般现在时
5.if从句用现在进行时，主句用一般将来时
6.if从句用现在完成时，主句用一般将来时If you have finished dinner I’ll ask the waiter for the bill.
第二：太阳唯一，用the不是a，
第三：help sb. do something.
第四：assist（sb. ）in/with sth.
assist（sb. ）in doing sth.
assist（sb. ）to do sth.
以上仅供参考，我记得不是很清楚，现在这么晚也困了。建议买本《初中英语语法大全》

Answer 2

句子的开头首写字母要大写

Answer 3

by happy way不太对，直接happily。

Answer 4

英语文章帮忙看看有什么错误，反正我是看不出错误，我觉得很正确，你们做的都是对的。

Answer 5

if你有个空格，看的人一定感激不尽