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中文:
今天早上,我很早地起了床,跟妈妈说:“妈妈,我可以去李明家帮助李明学习英语吗?”妈妈带着微笑说:“当然可以。”我很高兴,因为我和李明的计划实现了。
我们去蓝天公园游泳,我们还和公园里的小朋友们玩。我们玩得很愉快,直到天黑才回家。
当我回家时我很累,我向床冲去。妈妈走进我的房间问我:”今天你去哪了?”我小声地回答:“我去李明家了,你忘记了吗?”妈妈久久地看着我的眼睛,然后说:“如果你想出去玩,我可以允许。但是我实在不喜欢不诚实的人,你明白吗?我的孩子。”顿时我感到很惭愧,不知道跟妈妈说什么。
这是第一次我向妈妈说谎,但这也是最后一次。我下定决心不会再对任何人说谎。

英语:
This morning,I got up early,and I talked to my mother,"mun,would you mind if I go to Wangming's home to help him with his English?"Mother said with a smiled,"Of cours not."I was so happy because Wangming and my plan is come true.
We went to the "Lantian"park and went swimming.We also played with chilren in the park.We had a wonderful time and we didn't come home until the weather changed black.
When I came home,I was so tired and I throw myself on the bed.My mother came into my room and asked,"Where did you go today?"I answer with a low voice,"I went to Liming's home,don't you forget?"Mother look at my eyes for a long time.Then she said,"I don't mind if you want to go outside to play.But I really dislike the dishonest man.Do you know,my child?"I was very regret at that time,and I didn't know what to say.
This is the first time and also the last time that I told a lie to my mother.I make up my mind not to tell a lie to anyone.

第一行的talked to应该为asked ,而go改为 went
第二行的smiled改为smile
第三行的was改为had .
第四行的and went swimming改为for swimming.而 with 后改为 other chilren .We had a wonderful time and we didn't come home until the sky had changed black.
第三段的so tired 后应接as I throw myself on the bed.
第七行的 answer 改为answered
第八行look改为looked.
第九行 want to go outside to play改为went outside to play.
最后一段 This is 改为This was 而and 后加would be
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第1个回答  2009-08-28
第二行的smile不加过去式 因为在这里是名词
第三行的Wangming and my plan is come true is应该改成would
第四行的chilren打错了
第五行的天色似乎不应该用weather 但我也不知道该改成什么..
第七行的throw myself on the bed 似乎不能用on
第八行的answer要用过去时
第九行的look at my eyes at应该改成into
第十一行的Do you know应该改成do you understand
还有regret不能做形容词 所以前面应该加上felt
what to say应该改成what i can say
其余的 我找不出了
第2个回答  2009-08-28
第一段1.smiled→smile
2.is→would
第二段3.chilren→children
第三段4.throw→threw
5.answer→answered
6.forget后加it
7.at→into
8.regret→ashamed
第四段9.is→was
10.make→made

纯属个人意见哈。
第3个回答  2009-08-28
We had a wonderful time and we didn't come home until the sun went down.
I answered with a low voice.
This was the first time and also the last time that I told a lie to my mother.I made up my mind not to tell a lie to anyone.
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