英语高手分析下面这个句子有没有语法错误？我自己写的一个句子，想确认一下

Question

Such is a stark contrast to the conventional ways of searching library shelves that students nowadays can have convenient access to almost everything needed by clicking a button, both saving time and improving efficiency.
我把原来的句子改了一下，希望能用such is .... that ... 看看对吗。意思是传统的到图书馆查资料方式非常不同，现在的学生可以通过网络得到想要的资源。

Answer 1

such is ... that 略有 “如此。。。” 之意。
你的翻译也不错，但如果要用 such ... that
建议你这样说：
The internet presents such a stark contrast to the conventional ways of searching library shelves that nowadays students can simply conveniently access almost everything just by clicking a button, thus saving time and improving efficiency.

Answer 2

这个句子我认为没有预语法错误。
such在句子里面是一个代词，such做代词的时候，分为前指代和后指代两种。在这里它起到后指代作用。
后指代的意思是，指代后面提到的某个人或某件事。这时通常采用such as to do sth或such that的结构。例如：
Such is the influence of TV that it can make a person famous overnight.
这就是电视的影响，它可以使人一夜成名。
The pain in her foot wasn't such as to stop her walking. 她脚上的痛，还没有到妨碍走路的地步。

希望能够帮到你。

参考资料：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_601092880100kwcz.html

Answer 3

1 请注意比较：
nearly everything
almost anything

hardly anything

2 Such is a stark contrast to the conventional ways of searching library shelves that students nowadays can have convenient access to almost everything needed SIMPLY by clicking a button, which both saves time and improves efficiency.
(which===clicking a button)