请问这句话有语法错误吗？

Question

请问这句话有语法错误吗？For instance,there are many children living in slum and poor areas with great potentials, but they are not enhanced because they feel they can’t get ahead.

Answer 1

slums一般用复数， slum=poor area 重复了
potential用单数，with。。。修饰children，应当跟在其后面
For instance, there are children with great potential living in slums.

后面的句义不清。能告诉我你想表达什么意思吗？ 也许我可以帮你修改。

Answer 2

有错误的地追问

请问哪里错了

Answer 3

有追问

请问哪里错了