下面的英文有语法错误吗？有的话请指出并改正。

Question

下面的英文有语法错误吗？有的话请指出并改正。
May be some mistake in it.A is right.
I want to know that $85000 will be enough for B new Auto-line,or B will be cheaper than the price,Or the A's auto inspection-line was made by B?
And yesterday,"the auto-line is necessary?" I had told with Hobby about this question .we thought that manual test is enought for this project. So everything is not define now,only a quotation is needed.
Thank you very much if you can get more information about this auto-line.Jerry,Hobby and I will be more understanding about A's choosing

Answer 1

1.把May be改为Maybe或者把may be放到some mistakes后
2.mistake应为复数mistakes
3.want to know that后加whether,然后“？”改为句号
4.thought that manual test is enough，你应该打错enough了。你前面用thought，后面用了is，你自己想下吧
5.is not define，应该是被动，是defined喔
6.So everything is not define now,only a quotation is needed.这里是两个句子，你用了“，”，没有连词是不对的
7.more后面很少加动词喔，你可以把more移到understanding后
仅代表个人观点，你可以参考下追问

Jerry,Hobby and I will be understanding more about A's choosing 这句是不是语序完全不符合英文的规则，想表达“3个人 将更明白 A为何选择自动线”，而且想强调Jerry是更需要知道的那个人，该如何表达？

追答

貌似直接understand就可以了，即understand A's choice。
Jerry,Hobby and I will better understand A's choice,especially Jerry.
我不确定这样强调对不对，读得还蛮顺的===