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Question

作为联络工具，它体积小,重量轻,携带方便、快捷，而且还有方便的服务，它已经成为我们日常生活中不能缺少的物品了。然而，2008年的金融危机对移动电话行业带来了很大的冲击。本文主要通过研究分析了国内移动电话行业发展过程以及目前的市场现状，阐述了国内各品牌移动电话的生产企业在当前年形势下所要把握的机遇与遇到的挑战，同时探讨了要通过打造品牌，制定适合的价格，找到用户的兴趣，把握新的渠道方式，来提高移动电话厂商在市场中的竞争力。旨在为国内各移动电话厂商提供借鉴作用。

如果翻译的好，我愿意多加分，其实我知道各位不在乎多少分，但是请有能力的帮下忙了，谢谢

Answer 1

As a contact tool, its small size, light weight, portable, fast, and convenient service, all these make mobile phone an indispensable in our daily lives. However, the 2008 financial crisis has a great impact on the mobile phone industry.
The present paper, analysised the development process of domestic mobile phone industry, as well as its current market situation ; elaborated the the opportunities and challenges which the domestic mobile phone brand manufacturers need to seize or face in the current situation ;and through explored brand building , reasonable pirce setting , the user's interest finding as well as the new channel mode seizing , to improve market competitiveness of mobile phone manufacturers . All these are served to provide references for various mobile phone manufacturers.

如果作为论文摘要 建议楼主改一下其中一些句子 例如

本文主要分析了国内移动电话行业发展过程以及目前的市场现状;阐述了国内各品牌移动电话的生产企业在当前形势下所要把握的机遇与遇到的挑战;同时探讨了要通过打造品牌，制定适合的价格，找到用户的兴趣，把握新的渠道，以提高移动电话厂商的市场竞争力。旨在为国内各移动电话厂商提供借鉴作用。

其中的标点符号也很重要

Answer 2

As a tool for connecting with others, mobile phones have become a part of our lives for their small bulk, light in weight, convenience and prompt service. However, the financial crisis in 2008 has put a big impact on the mobile phone industry. This article is set out to analyze the development process for domestic mobile phone industry and explain the opportunity and challenge under the current situation for domestic mobile phone manufacturers. At the same time, it aims to introduce a new method for mobile phone manufacturers' reference to improve the competition in the market by creating a brand, setting a reasonable price and utilizing new channel.
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Answer 3

As the agencies of liaison, its volume is small, the weight is light, carries conveniently, quickly, moreover also has the convenience service, it already became the goods which in our daily life cannot Its volume is small, the weight is light, carries conveniently, quickly, moreover also has the convenience service, it already became As communication facility, the goods which in our daily life cannot lack. However, 2008 financial crisis has brought the very big impact on the mobile phone profession. This article mainly has analyzed the domestic mobile phone profession developing process as well as the present market present situation through the research, elaborated the domestic various brands mobile phone's Production enterprise, when the year before last situation must grasp the opportunity with the challenge which met, simultaneously discussed must through the making brand, formulated the suitable price, found the user the interest, grasped the new channel way, enhanced the mobile phone manufacturer in market