求大神帮我看看这段话，英语翻译的对不对

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This is our trip to Cairo, Cairo is the capital of Egypt, Egypt's largest city.
We set off at 4:10 in the afternoon of October 2nd at 6:20 in the morning of second days, and then take a bus to my hotel, the car takes about 18 yuan.
Need to live in the hotel for six nights, 649 yuan. My hotel is located in the centre of Cairo, and a ten minute walk to the Nile and the museum.
In the afternoon we went to the Egyptian Museum, tickets need 75 yuan. In the Egyptian Museum holds Tutan Carmen's gold mask, Tutan Carmen is a eighteen year old young pharaoh.
Second days we went to the Nile, the Nile is the longest river in the world. The Nile calls for the moon in the Indian language.
On the third day we took the subway and changed into a taxi to reach the Sphinx, Sphinx was built by a man named Bhave, and it has a beautiful legend.
The fourth day we went to Memphis, here is the place of the earliest pyramid, and there's a huge statue of Ramses II, I really like the story of Ramses II.
The fifth day, I came to Egypt's most famous Pyramid, the mysterious and ancient architecture, the world's eight major architectural wonders.
The sixth day, we came to the rare Lalili market, this is the best place to buy souvenirs, I like here very spicy. There's a lot of souvenirs about Egyptian culture.
In these days, we can not help but see the Egyptian culture and scenery, but also to taste a lot of food here. Egyptians like meat and sweets. The kappa step, and ful medames, sandwiches, and many local dessert balackberry brown sugar meringue and Basbousa topped with walnut
On the last day we were riding a camel in the desert to play a lap, the afternoon at 10:30 to leave Cairo. In these days we fare about 100 of the fare consumption of about 300, the other 500 of the total consumption of 12889
Cairo trip ended, bye bye!

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首先想说的是，因为不知道你的用途，所以不敢随便下结论，但是作为一篇文章来讲还是太过记流水账了....不管是中文还是英文...
我帮你语法上修改了一下 ，参见下文
This is our trip to Cairo. Cairo is the capital of Egypt, Egypt's largest city.
We set off at 4:10 in the afternoon of October 2nd and then took a bus to my hotel which caused about 18 yuan.
My hotel was located in the centre of Cairo, and it only take us ten minute to walk to the Nile and the museum. We stayed there for six nights and that caused 649 yuan.
In the afternoon we went to the Egyptian Museum. The tickets were 75 yuan. In the Egyptian Museum holds Tutan Carmen's gold mask which belongs to a eighteen year old young pharaoh, Tutan Carmen. The Second days we went to the Nile. The Nile is the longest river in the world and the Nile calls for the moon in the Indian language.
On the third day we took the subway and changed into a taxi to reach the Sphinx. Sphinx was built by a man named Bhave, and it has a beautiful legend.
The fourth day we went to Memphis. This is the place of the earliest pyramid, and there's a huge statue of Ramses II and I really like the story of Ramses II.
The fifth day, we came to Egypt's most famous Pyramid, the mysterious and ancient architecture, one of the world's eight major architectural wonders.
The sixth day, we came to the rare Lalili market, this is the best place to buy souvenirs. 【后面那句话我不知道你想表达什么意思就先删掉了】There's a lot of souvenirs about Egyptian culture.
In these days, we can not help but see the Egyptian culture and scenery, but also to taste a lot of food here. Egyptians like meat and sweets. The kappa step, and ful medames, sandwiches, and many local dessert balackberry brown sugar meringue and Basbousa topped with walnut
On the last day we rode a camel in the desert to play a lap. And then in the afternoon , we left Cairo. In these days we fare about 100 of the fare consumption of about 300, the other 500 of the total consumption of 12889【这句话我也不太清楚你的意思 所以没改 但是肯定是有语法错误的】
Cairo trip ended, bye bye!