请英语高手帮忙看下这段翻译是否正确 ，如有错误请帮忙修改。不要用在线翻译软件谢谢。

Question

我的名字是周进 来自接收中心，我已经工作11年了，现在在接收中心二班（解释：即中班，公司分为白，中，夜三个班次）担任组长 负责接收，装卸货物，人员及现场监督管理，协助主管处理日常工作事务，为生产所需物料提供支持。
本人的翻译是：My name is Zhoujin , from receiving center. I have been working in receiving center for 11 years. now i am the team leader of second class , in charge of receiving goods, loading.and unloading goods, managing workshop and workers helping supervisor handle daily affairs, preparing components for production.

Answer 1

第一句话就有问题：应当改为I'm Zhou Jin,from receiving center(名字分为两部分，姓在前，名在后。此外照楼主的意思，就我的名字来自就收中心。这是错的，主语应该是I）
第二句：介词应该用AT IN主要用于大地点 此外receiving center可以用THERE 来代替，避免重复
第三句：SECOND 前应该加定冠词THE，表顺序的序数词前应该加定冠词 有一种情况不加比如
I ONLY ATE AN APPLE. I WANT TO A SECOND ON,
还有GOOD 本身就是货物的复数，不必再加S。还有在preparing components for production前加一个 and
就这些了，纯手工输入 望楼主满意

Answer 2

My name is Zhoujin.（在后面会重复，此处删）I have been working in receiving center for 11 years. Currently（当前）, I am the team leader of second shift （第二轮/班）. I am in charge of receiving, loading.and unloading goods. I am also responsible for managing workshop, helping my supervisor to handle daily affairs, and preparing components for production. （病句分段，略加冠词)

Answer 3

1、里面的二班应该翻译为noon shift，中午换班的意思，now i am the team leader of noon-shift team
2、最后的生产物料，我觉得用material好些吧

其他的在文意上都没问题。

Answer 4

my name is zhoujin, i have been worked in the receiving center for 11 years already. now i am the leader of the afternoon team. as the leader i am in charge of receiving, loading,unloading good, supervise the workers and managing the workshop. as my responsoblity, i also need to support the manager to deal with daily affairs, and preparing components for production.