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Subject: 关于推迟TD业务移交的建议
Dear boss,

鉴于以下几点问题,我建议将TD业务的移交比原计划推迟两周进行:
A、 人手不够。现在只有Sophie一个人负责相关业务,她现在已经很吃力了。让她在短时间内接手另外两个城市的业务,一定是不能很好胜任的。复核人员也没有怎么受过培训,而且兼做其他工作,对Sophie帮不了多少。
B、 业务量比计划有所增加。据了解,近期各地的业务量都有较大幅度的增加。另外,各城市特点不同,例如广州,尽管全月总量没有上海多,但高峰时段(如每周一)客户非常集中,而且大多要求紧急处理。
C、 员工还需要更多时间再熟悉操作规程,就现在的处理过程来看,差错比较多,并且很少有时间加以总结和改进。如果现在贸然增加业务量,可能会带来更多风险,甚至损失。
D、 我们现在的系统设置还不允许我们处理一些特殊业务,也就是说我们的准备工作并没有完全满足接手的条件。这也为移交加大了困难。

如果推迟两周(4月18日开始),即使上述问题不能完全加以解决,至少可以让准备工作比现在做的充分。不知此建议是否合适。
谢谢您的理解和支持。
这两个是一样的,都不太清晰,急!!

Subject: 关于推迟TD业务移交的建议
Subject: about delayed TD business over suggestion

Dear boss,
Dear boss,

鉴于以下几点问题,我建议将TD业务的移交比原计划推迟两周进行:
In view of the following problems, I suggest putting TD business than originally planned handover of delay two weeks:

A、 人手不够。
A, shorthanded.

现在只有Sophie一个人负责相关业务,她现在已经很吃力了。
Now, only a person responsible for relevant business Sophie, she is now very hard.

让她在短时间内接手另外两个城市的业务,一定是不能很好胜任的。
Let her take over another in a short time of two cities business, must be not very good up to it.

复核人员也没有怎么受过培训,而且兼做其他工作,对Sophie帮不了多少。
Check personnel nor how trained, and holds concurrently do other work, how to Sophie can help.

B、 业务量比计划有所增加。
B, turnover increased than plan.

据了解,近期各地的业务量都有较大幅度的增加。
All learned, recent volume have relatively substantially increased.

另外,各城市特点不同,例如广州,尽管全月总量没有上海多,但高峰时段(如每周一)客户非常集中,而且大多要求紧急处理。
In addition, each city different characteristics, such as guangzhou, although all month, but no Shanghai total prime-time (such as weekly), and most are centralized customer request emergencies.

C、 员工还需要更多时间再熟悉操作规程,就现在的处理过程来看,差错比较多,并且很少有时间加以总结和改进。
C, employees still needs more time to familiar with the operation procedures, they now see the process, mistakes more, and rarely had time summarized and improvement.

如果现在贸然增加业务量,可能会带来更多风险,甚至损失。
If now rushed increase turnover, could bring more risk, even lost.

D、 我们现在的系统设置还不允许我们处理一些特殊业务,也就是说我们的准备工作并没有完全满足接手的条件。
D, we now system Settings are still not allow us to deal with some special business, that is our preparation and not fully satisfy took conditions.

这也为移交加大了困难。
It also increased the difficulty for the handover.

如果推迟两周(4月18日开始),即使上述问题不能完全加以解决,至少可以让准备工作比现在做的充分。
If postponed two weeks (April 18 started), even if the problem cannot be solved completely, can at least make preparations for the full than do now.

不知此建议是否合适。
Don't know this suggestion is appropriate.
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第1个回答  2011-03-29
Subject: on the proposal to postpone the transfer of TD Business

Dear boss,
in view of the following, I propose the transfer of TD business two weeks later than originally planned were:
A, not enough manpower. Sophie is now only one person responsible for the relevant business, she now has a very tough out. Let her take over the other two cities in a short time the business must not be very competent. Did not review how officers are trained, but also offering other work, Sophie can not help much.
B, volume of business plans has increased. It is understood that the volume of business over recent have a more substantial increase. In addition, the different characteristics of each city, such as Guangzhou, Shanghai although not total more than full month, but the peak period (eg weekly) customers are very focused and most of the required emergency treatment.
C, employees also need more time to be familiar with the operating procedures to deal with the present process, the more errors and had little time to review and improvement. If the current rush to increase the volume of business may bring more risks, or even losses.
D, our present system settings also does not allow us to deal with some special business, that our preparation did not fully meet the conditions for taking over. It also increased the difficulties for the transfer. If postponed for two weeks (April 18 onwards), even if these problems can not be resolved, at least you can do to prepare than it is now full. I wonder if this proposal is appropriate. Thank you for your understanding and support.
第2个回答  2011-03-29
Subject: Suggestion about puttingTD business hand over off
Dear boss,

Considering of the following problems, I suggest to put TD business hand over off for two weeks:

A、 Shorthanded.

Now, Sophie is the only person who has responsibility for this business , she is overloaded now.

Taking over more businesses of two new cities isn`t easy for her in a short time.

Reviewing officer has not trained and has other work to do, not helpful for Sophie.

B、Volume of the business is over the plan.

As far as I learned, volume of the business in various regions have considerable increase recently.

By the other hand, different cities have different characteristics, such as Guangzhou city, though the month summation is less than Shanghai, in summit period (every Monday) , customers are concentrated and most of them want urgency service.

C、Employees need more time to get familiar with the operation procedures.Baseing on the progress,they can hardly to have time to
improve and summarise.

If we now increase our businesses with out careful consideration, it could cause more risks, even losses.

D、 We are not allowed to handle some system special business under the system setup, that is to say our preparation work has not fully meet the conditions for hand over.

This would be more difficult for hand over

If we can put off TD for two weeks (April 18 begin),preparation work would be more sufficient than now even if those problems haven`t been solved completely.

I have no idear if my suggestion is appropriate.

Thank you for your undersanding and supporting.
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