请各位英语高手帮忙修改以下报幕词,万分感谢!急!

我女儿5月31号晚上要主持她所在幼儿园举办的六一晚会,有些报幕词是英文的,是她园长写的,我感觉有点不对劲,由于水平有限,请各位大虾帮忙看看,看有没有语病或错漏。谢谢!以下是台词:
We small-class-based younger brother and sister are very brave,they are actively involved in rehearsal,for we have prepared a lovely dance<baby and dear>.
该节目是一个爵士舞,叫《Baby and Dear》,是小班小朋友跳的。我觉得第一个单词we是不是改为our 比较好些,还有brother and sister 应该加复数吧。不对请赐教!看看其他有没问题,还有几天要用了,各位抓紧帮帮忙啊!谢谢!

Our younger brothers and sisters of small-class-based are very brave,they are actively involved in rehearsal,and have prepared a lovely dance for us ,Let's enjoy :<baby and dear>.
这算是通顺一点。
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第1个回答  2011-05-21
We small-class-based younger brothers and sisters
are very brave,they are actively involved in rehearsal,for who we have prepared a lovely dance<baby and dear
那个we和后面是同位语没问题; brother and sister 应该加复数;rehearsal前面应加the;最后一句they are actively involved in the rehearsal, 下一句换成and here we have prepared a lovely dance<baby and dear>.Welcome!会更好
第2个回答  2011-05-21
We small-class-based younger brothers and sisters
are very brave,they are actively involved in rehearsal,for who we have prepared a lovely dance<baby and dear>.
那个we和后面是同位语没问题,
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