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    sale of tobacco is prohibited to those less than 18 years old and cigarette advertisement should be banned,do u agree?why? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertising.
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    推荐答案   推荐于2018-01-01
    第一段 引出话题，表达观点
    1． Nowadays , an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that ….(背景介绍)
    2． However， whether…. Is a controversial issue.(辩论话题)
    3． My view is that ……(写作观点)
    第二段
    4，First, it is obvious that ….(第一原因，中心句)
    5， This means that ……(进一步具体阐述理由)
    6，So,……(所以观点成立)

    第三段
    7．Moreover,……(第二原因，中心句)
    8，For example,…..(举例，越具体越好)
    9，例证解释说明

    第四段
    10，That is not to say that…….(并不完全否认对方观点)
    11，Of course,….(承认反方观点合理性)
    12, But…..（驳斥反方观点不合理性）

    第五段（结尾）
    13， In sum, ….(重申观点)
    14， Meanwhile,……(不能忽视反方观点)
    15，By doing so can we ensure that ….(思想提升)
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    第1个回答  2011-05-31
    还是多看书吧，报个学习班也不错，世纪有雅思就很好
    第2个回答  2011-06-01
    这也可以
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