求英语翻译,希望能简洁的表达出我要的意思,复杂了难得理解,谢谢!!!

求翻译,内容如下:
您好,我叫XX,xx年毕业于XX学校,我的专业是XX,在毕业后我有做过技术支持和网络管理的工作,这两份工作都有涉及到网络的维护,所以我在网络方面的工作经验比系统及软件的维护方面更多一些,我的优势在于计算机知识扎实,对系统、网络、软件都比较熟悉,这让我有着很强的可塑性,我想对于公司来说这一点也是很重要的,同时,我有着很好的工作态度,我的学习能力及沟通能力都很不错,虽然我的口语上算不上熟练,但我想这只是时间的问题,当我熟悉这样的一个工作环境之后我自信我能做的很好。
这是为了去外企面试准备的,呵呵,英语口语实在不行,好多年没用英语了,写点什么还行,要说的话真有难度,要是有实际的面试经验和策略送上的话我采纳时会再加分的,谢谢!
我先把悬赏提高到200,如果给的经验什么的满意的话再追加100分..各位大神给给力啊,帮帮忙

Good morning/afternoon. My name is XX. Having graduated from XX University as a XX major in 20XX, I took up two jobs in the filed of network maintenance, so I'm more experienced in network than in maintenance of system & softwares. A good command of computer knowledge and the familiarity with systems, network and softwares are my strengths, which give me more potential to be even better. I think this can also be a blessing for the company. Moreover, I'm a quick learner with a good attitude toward work and good communication skills. Even though my oral English is far from being pefect, I'll make every effort to make a difference, and I'm sure I can make it!

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第1个回答  2011-04-15
Hello.My name is XX.I graduated from (University+XX或者是XX School).
I major in XX./My major is XX.
I have the experience of doing technical support and network management.
And both the two jobs are related to network maintainance.
That's why I'm more experienced in network than maintainance of system and software.
I have a solid foundation of computer knowledge, especially the system,network and software, which renders me high adaptability to work.I think it is also what the company values.
Meanwhile, I have strong responsibility in work and I'm good at learning as well as communicating.
Although my oral English is not that proficient, it's only a matter of time before I get more fluent in speaking English.
All in all, I believe I can do well when I get adapted to the new working conditions.
第2个回答  2011-04-15
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is XX, I was graduated from XX University in XX, my major is XX. After graduation, I had been engaged in technical support and network management which were related to network maintenance, thus I have more experience in network than system and software maintenance. My advantage is that I have solid background in computer knowledge, and I am familiar with system, network and software, which makes me quite malleable, and I think this is also very important for the company. Meanwhile, I possess good work atitude, learning ability and communication ability. Though my spoken language is not very proficient, I think I just need more time. After I get familiar with such a working environment, I am confident that I can do a good job. Thanks.

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第3个回答  2011-04-17
您好,我叫XX,xx年毕业于XX学校,我的专业是XX,
Hello, my name is XX, XX, graduated from XX school, my major is XX,
在毕业后我有做过技术支持和网络管理的工作,这两份工作都有涉及到网络的维护,
After graduation I have done technical support and network management work, this two jobs have involves network maintenance,
所以我在网络方面的工作经验比系统及软件的维护方面更多一些,我的优势在于计算机知识扎实,对系统、网络、软件都比较熟悉,这让我有着很强的可塑性,
So my working experience in network than systems and software maintenance more, my advantage lies in the computer knowledge, the system, network, software are familiar, this let me have a strong plasticity,

我想对于公司来说这一点也是很重要的
I think it a bit for the company is so important
同时,我有着很好的工作态度,我的学习能力及沟通能力都很不错,虽然我的口语上算不上熟练,但我想这只是时间的问题,当我熟悉这样的一个工作环境之后我自信我能做的很好。
At the same time, I had a very good working attitude, I study ability and good communication skills are very good, although my oral not skilled, but I think it is just a matter of time, when I am familiar with such a working environment after that I think I can do very well.
第4个回答  2011-04-15
Good morning, my name is XXX, I had graduated from XXX university in XXX majoring in XXX. I have had two jobs about technical assistance and administration of networks after graduation, both of which related to network maintenance. As a result, I have more work experience in network maintenance than in system and software maintenance. My superiority lies in mastery of computeracy, being familiar with system, network and software, which makes me have strong plasticity, and I think this is also important to the company. Meanwhile, I have positive attitude toward work, I have good ability in learning and communicating with others. Although, I am not very skilled in oral English, I think it just a matter of time. I believe I will do better after I became familiar with this work environment.
第5个回答  2011-04-15
hellow,I am 名字 graduated from 学校 in 年份my main course is 专业,I have done some technology support and net administration work after graduation.Both the two jobs have connection with network maintence,so my experience in network are better than software maintence.My advantages exist in that I am rich in computer knowledge and familar with system net ,and software,this make me malleable,I think it's important to the company,at the same time I have good work attitude , my learning and communicating ability are very good too,even though I am not good at oral english ,I just need time ,I am confident that I will do better when I adapt to the new environment.
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