你班将举行以My dreamed career为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你根据提示写一篇演讲稿:1. What’s your desired career?(e.g. lawyer, astronaut, writer… ) 2. Why do you choose this career? 3. What preparations will you make to realize your dream?注意 1词数120左右,开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数。2书写清楚,卷面整洁。3行文连贯,符合英语表达习惯。Good afternoon, boys and girls, I feel honored to deliver a speech here sharing my dreamed future with you. I hope to be…That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
Good afternoon, boys and girls: I feel honored to deliver a speech here sharing my dream with you. I hope to be a teacher in the future. The main reason is that I get a lot of positive energy from my English teacher, who promotes lifelong learning attitude. As a teacher I’ll be motivated to keep updating what I have learned through lifelong learning so as to keep pace with young students ,because they are always energetic and have new ideas. Besides , education plays an increasing important role in the development of society . Therefore, more qualified teachers are in great demand. What’s more, I’m out-going and enjoy communicating with others, which is definitely helpful in the teaching career. To reach my dream ,I will work hard to enter a good normal university to equip myself with relevant knowledge such as psychology, education theory and teaching skills. I believe I will make a good teacher through efforts. That’s all. Thank you for you attention |
本文是演讲稿,已经给了提示,切记不可按条回答,十分生硬没有条理。题目是我的梦想,所以文章应该以第一人称描述,而时态也应以一般现在时为主。注意句子之间的衔接,多运用连词,使文章句法流畅,逻辑关系严谨。 【亮点说明】文中用 很多固定短语,如play a role in , in demand , what’s more,such as , equip with, 并且很好的运用时态。句子衔接不仅仅运用连词,如therefore, besides, 还用the reason is that, 这种高级句型结构。还运用非限制性定语从句,不定式做目的状语,使文章增色不少,还运用大量的高级词汇,如 updating,out-going, definitely ,effort.,给人眼前一亮的感觉。注意这些词汇的正确使用。 |