懂英语的来。帮翻译下英文诗(英译汉)急用!!

麻烦翻译下面这首童谣,请注意用语,要有诗意。
Hush,little baby,don't say a word.
Papa's going to buy you a mockingbird.
If that mockingbird won't sing.
Papa's going to buy you a diamond ring.
If that diamond ring turns to brass.
Papa's going to buy you a looking-grass.
If that looking-grass gets broke.
Papa's going to buy you a billy-goat.
If that billy-goat runs away.
Papa's going to buy you another today.

字面直译:
Hush,little baby,don't say a word. 嘘,小宝贝,不要说话
Papa's going to buy you a mockingbird.爸爸会给你买只反舌鸟。
If that mockingbird won't sing.如果反舌鸟儿不歌唱
Papa's going to buy you a diamond ring.爸爸会给你买个钻石戒
If that diamond ring turns to brass.如果钻石戒指变成铜
Papa's going to buy you a looking-grass.爸爸会给你买面明镜子
If that looking-grass gets broke.如果明亮的镜子打碎了
Papa's going to buy you a billy-goat.爸爸会给你买个山羊
If that billy-goat runs away.如果那山羊他跑走了
Papa's going to buy you another today.爸爸会给你再买个今天

这个童谣的重点在于两句一组的句尾押韵。所以试着改一下:
Hush,little baby,don't say a word. 嘘,小宝贝儿别说话
Papa's going to buy you a mockingbird.爸爸给你买只小鸟叫喳喳。
If that mockingbird won't sing.如果小鸟儿叫得不热烈
Papa's going to buy you a diamond ring.爸爸给你买个钻石戒
If that diamond ring turns to brass.如果钻石戒指不闪光
Papa's going to buy you a looking-grass.爸爸给你买面镜子明亮亮
If that looking-grass gets broke.如果明亮的镜子打碎掉
Papa's going to buy you a billy-goat.爸爸给你买个小羊羔
If that billy-goat runs away.如果小羊羔儿逃跑了
Papa's going to buy you another today.爸爸给你再买个今朝来

最后两句的押韵有点勉强哈。
供参考。
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第1个回答  2011-03-15
安静,小宝贝,不要说一句话,
爸爸的会去给你买一个戒指。
如果那只知更鸟不会唱歌,
爸爸的会去给你买一枚钻石戒指。
如果那钻石戒指转向黄铜,
爸爸的打算买一同宗。
如果那镜子被断了,
爸爸的会去给你买一billy-goat。
如果那billy-goat逃,
爸爸会买给你一个今天。
第2个回答  2011-03-14
安静,小宝贝,不要说一个字。
爸爸会去给你买一只知更鸟。
如果那只知更鸟不会唱歌。
爸爸会去给你买一枚钻石戒指。
如果那枚钻石戒指变成黄铜。
爸爸会去给你买一块草坪。
如果那块草坪被破坏了。
爸爸会去给你买一只比利山羊。
如果那比利山羊跑掉了。
爸爸会买给你另一个今天。
第3个回答  2011-03-14
别哭,宝贝
爸爸去给你买一只知更鸟
如果知更鸟不唱歌
爸爸去给你买一个钻石戒指
如果戒指不再闪耀
爸爸去给你买一面镜子
如果镜子破了
爸爸去给你买一只山羊
如果山羊跑不动了
爸爸再去给你买一只本回答被提问者采纳
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