Summer I went to Shandong, I was in July 1st. That is my hometown, my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma. We ride in a car,get there. Where we live, Grandpa's home, it is very comfortable. I also visited Qingdao, where I took a lot of photos. During the holiday I most often do is take pictures, where the scenery is very beautiful. I am back in July 8th. I had a wonderful summer vacation.
【PS:我写的~我怕语句不通顺,特地找人翻译~亲语句不通顺的地方告诉我怎么改~满意加分~】
老大,不是我说唉~我才刚刚接触英语作文唉~我学过的也很少唉~我要是交了你那种的作文,老师绝对会抽我的!而且老师要求是至少十句话!也就是十个内容!不是我依靠网络唉~我怕语句不通顺被老师罚!不过,你这么热心,我还是给你满意好了!(PS:满意追分?)
追答哈哈哈,没事啊,我可以帮你改一下你写的哈。看到你那么上进。好好学习
Summer I went to Shandong in 1st July . That is my hometown, my parents went to see Grandpa and grandma. We rode in a car to get there. Where we live, Grandpa's home, it is very comfortable. I also visited Qingdao, where I took a lot of photos. During the holiday I mostly to do was taking pictures, because the scenery is very beautiful. I was back in July 8th. I had a wonderful summer vacation.
这样应该好点,注意一下时态
真的~我没有语句不通顺?亲一定要提出来,不然我会被老师骂死的~(PS:想要的追分?)
追答你写的很好。不用担心。