写英语作文怎么检测自己语法呢

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I will very appreciate that you may give some help to me (for my study) in the later days.

Please allow me to introduce myself here. 这句我觉得可以删掉，要么放在 第一段第一句后面。
likes to read a book -->Something like reading，taking a walk and so on.

although she is a woman, but full of wit,-->although引导的从句不能与but, however连用，但可与yet, still连用. 这个句子可以改成： even though she is a woman , but she is ful of wit..
Though I am quiet, but like to like-minded friends, learn together... 这个句子。。。。。。
I hope that they will be able to study abroad --> they ??

个人意见，仅供参考，不能保证百分百正确哦~