[50分]帮我将这段面试自我介绍翻译成英文~谢谢~

Question

我之前就职于XXX公司.有将近两年的工作经验.
在之前的公司,我担任系统数据专员的职务.负责将我所在部门的所有业务数据录入公司系统.并会在需要的时候参与系统问题研讨会.新系统上线测评等.我性格开朗.业余时间喜欢很画画.我的缺点是英文水平不太好.不过我一直在尽力学习.

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请将我上面的文字翻译成中文.我面试要用....
谢谢啦 谢谢啦!!!

Answer 1

I worked in XX company, having about two years' experience.

In that company, I worked as a system data specialist, responsible for keying in all the projects of my department to the company system and take part in the seminar of system problems and online test for new system if necessary.

I'm very open-minded, and have a hobby of painting in leisure time. Though I'm not enough professional in English, I never stop studying and improving.

另外提个建议，面试时尽量不要说“我的缺点是。。。”，而应该用“我在。。。方面还有些不足”等委婉的说法。

Answer 2

Before I worked for the company XXX. Nearly two years of work experience.
Prior to the company, I was the Commissioner's office data. I will be responsible for all business sectors where the data entry systems. And will need time to participate in a seminar on the system. The new online evaluation system, and so on. I cheerful personality. Amateur Time is like painting. I have the shortcomings of the level of English is not very good. But I have been trying to learn.

Answer 3

good xx,sir
i have two years 'working experience in my previous company.there,i worked as a system data specialist,being responsible for to record all the business data into the company system of my department.and if needed,i will attend the seminar about system problems and the text of new system.i am outgoing and fond of drawing in my free time.of course, i have shortcomings.i dont do well in english,but i am trying my best to learn it.
根据时间决定啊 早上就是good morning.

Answer 4

我之前就职于XXX公司.有将近两年的工作经验.
I was working in XXX Company for two years.

在之前的公司,我担任系统数据专员的职务.负责将我所在部门的所有业务数据录入公司系统.
In my previous company, I was employed as an Systems Data Specialist, responsible for inputting all the relevant business and sales data of my department into our company's computer system.

并会在需要的时候参与系统问题研讨会.新系统上线测评等.
I would also participate in meetings to resolve any issue regarding our company's computer system including new system online evaluations when required.

我性格开朗.业余时间喜欢很画画.
I have a vibrant personality and love to draw in my leisure time.

我的缺点是英文水平不太好.不过我一直在尽力学习.
Although I am currently lacking in my command of English but I believe that with my diligence and go-getter attitude, I will be able to master it in the near future.

Answer 5

既然您的英语水平有限，我给您的翻译是简单直接，但又囊括了所有您想说的。

I had worked for xx Company for nearly two years. My position in that company was System Data Specialist; my responsibility was to input all the relevant operation data of my department into the company’s main system. When required, I would attend seminars on system problems and evaluations of new system online.
I have a pleasant personality and I am fond of drawing in my leisure. As for my English, there is a lot of room for improvement, but I am striving to learn.