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Dear Mr.Brown,I'd like to introduce myselfto you,I want apple for aposition in your firm.I graduate from college three years ago and since then I have worked as a engineer.I am good at English and know someJapanese andGermany.I am hardworking and careful in something I do.I amhonest,kind and easily to get onwith.Born in1985.I am still unmarried.I amsure Iam capable but if I am accepted,I will try out my best to contribute to our firm.I amfit at the position.My telephone number is11111111.I am looking forward to be answered early.
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Dear Mr.Brown,I'd like to introduce myselfto you,I want to apply for a position in your firm.I graduated from college three years ago and since then I have been working as a engineer.I am good at English and know some Japanese and German.I am hardworking and careful in the thing I do.I am honest,kind and easy to get on with.Born in1985，I am still unmarried.I am sure Iam capable but if I am accepted,I will try (out去掉 )my best to make contribution to our firm.I am suitable for the position.My telephone number is11111111.I am looking forward to being answered early.

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第1个回答 2014-01-04

Dear Mr.Brown,I'd like to introduce myself to you,I want apple(打错了嘛？。。apply) for a position in your firm.I graduate(graduated) from college three years ago and since then I have worked as a(an) engineer.I am good at English and know some Japanese and Germany(German).I am hardworking and careful in something(everything) I do.I am honest,kind and easily(easy) to get on with.Born in1985.I am still unmarried.I am sure (+that) I am capable but(only) if I am accepted,I will try out(去掉) my best to contribute to our firm.I amfit at(for) the position.My telephone number is11111111.I am looking forward to be(being) answered early本回答被提问者采纳

第2个回答 2014-01-04

第一行：want apply--中间加to；graduate--graduated；
第二行：a engineer--an engineer；
第三行：Germany--German；something--everything；
第四行：easily--easy；but if……--and if；
第五行：try out--去掉out；fit at--fit for；
第六行：be--being。

第3个回答 2014-01-04

an engineer
I am hardworking and careful in everything I do
but用的不对，应该是and
不需要out , 直接try my best
句式实在太单一了，逻辑也有点问题。。。

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