求帮写篇英语作文，急！介绍学校

Question

题目是：“你来自哪里，介绍下你的学校，并说下好与坏。”
内容自由发挥即可（能跟国外学校对比一下最好，比如和国外比学业特别紧张，很少有锻炼自主动手能力之类，但是好的方面同样一定要写），最好用一些难度不低
的词汇。80词到100词左右就好，当然愿意写多点自然更好..十分感谢！如果需要更多分我可以注册别的号来给分。急用！大概今天晚上的时候就要交上去了，十分感谢！！！

Answer 1

Tom Lee（汤姆李）：My name is Tom Lee. I am fourteen. I study at No. 4 ICT School, not a very big school. There are about six hundred students in my school. There is only one building in our school, but we have a very big playground. There are ten computer labs and one library in the building, and there are many computer books in the library. We often go there in the afternoon.
我的名字是汤姆李。我十四岁。我在第二通信学校学习，不是非常大的一个学校。在我学校大约有六百名学生。我们学校只有一栋楼，但是我们有一个非常大的操场。在楼里面有十间电脑室和一个图书馆，图书馆里也有很多计算机的书籍。我们经常在下午去那里。
We are busy every day. We have four classes in the morning, and two in the afternoon.

我们每天都很忙。我们上午有四节课，下午两节。
ICT is my favorite subject and our ICT teachers are very patient and helpful. I am good at ICT, but bad in history.
通信是我最喜欢的学科而且我们学学校的通信老师是很有耐心也很乐于助人的。我的通信学得很好，但是历史则学得不好。

Tom Lee（汤姆李）： school?
你的学校呢？

（你自己）：I study in a beautiful school. There are many trees and flowers in campus. It’s green all the year round. There are three buildings in my school. Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. Our classroom is large and bright. We are happy to study in it. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a basketball court and a football field. After class, I often play in the basketball court. And, there are many other places for fun in my school. I like my lovely school.
我在一所美丽学校上学，校园里有很多树木和花，一年四季都是绿的。我的学校总共有三座建筑，其中两座是教学楼另外一座是办公楼和图书馆。我们的教室宽敞明亮，在里面学习很开心。此外，我的学校有两个操场，一个篮球场和一个足球场。课后我经常在篮球场玩。另外，学校还有很多可以玩耍的地方。我爱我的学校。

Tom Lee（汤姆李）：Your school is very good!
你的学校真好！

Answer 2

First of all ,I come from地点.,I am in 。。。学校. secondly ,I am satisfied with my school,what i like most is the scenery of the school.Meanwhile,my teachers is responsible..it has many strengths,but also has weekness.the reason why i said it is that i feel stressful in my school.Compared with foreign school,its surronding is so stressful that we can not manage it . not only does it has that shortcomings,it also lacks of social practice.last but not least, Circumstance permitting, i hope that my school could start more activities to reduce the burden of learning .........懒写了 几个月没写作文了 以前在班上写的还行的哈 网露珠笑纳 表示楼上楼下的狗屁不通啊 不知道从哪粘贴来的 我打了好久 自己写的追问

多谢相助，也十分感谢楼下几位的帮忙...不过我是刚到加拿大，在测试中是谈论以前的学校，您好能改一些相应的内容吗？多谢！我也很喜欢看南方公园..

追答

你在国内没上一些必要的课吗 帮人帮到底吧 but also has weekness删掉换成
however, After arriving in my new scool in Canada,I find my previous school has its weekness which Chinese school always have. 优点最好再加一个

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Answer 3

（在哪自己写吧）.First here is our favourite place our beautifui garden many trees and many flowers in it. then you can go into it .Now,you know why we love it right .we can write red and chat in it.(tell you a secret:I like it because it is cool in summer and warm in winter

Now,I will tell you more about my friends &teachers. Over here teachers are friendly to us,so we never say a bad word about them.Because of these,students can get good grades at my school.(Would you like to come?)

I think my school is one of the best schools in the world.Because we have good teachers good students and everything is beautiful. I like it, every at it likes it.

Answer 4

my school is very big and beautiful!the teachers are very strict,but sometimes they are also kind.Tall buildings show our school's charm.today,we can play in the playground;and night ,we can sleep in the clean and beautiful!I love my school!