Hello everyone! Today, I stand on this stage as I really like to be the English Rep of this class, to help you all with your learning of English. I am not trying to show off in front of you all, but I am quite confident in my English level as I always score first in class for English. My purpose of being the English Rep is to help you all with your studies, to improve the average English score of our class. Promises are hard to keep, but I promise you all, if I become the English Rep, I will do my best to help the teacher and you all, if you have any questions regarding English, feel free to approach me as I will do my best to help you all. Thank you.
能不能麻烦您帮忙改一下,让人听着能舒服一点。【改英文的】
追答Hello everyone! Today, I 【am honored to】stand on this stage as I really like to be the English Rep of this class, to help you all with your learning of English. I am not trying to show off in front of you all, but I am quite confident in my English level as I always score first in class for English. 【删掉这一句。改成as you all know I usually score first in class, so I am really confident in my English level and I believe I have the ability to help all of you】My purpose of being the English Rep is to help you all with your studies, to improve the average English score of our class. Promises are hard to keep, but I promise you all, if I become the English Rep, I will do my best to help the teacher and you all, if you have any questions regarding English, feel free to approach me as I will do my best to help you all. 【I believe we will all make progress as long as we make efforts together, I will lead you to that success. Give me a chance and give you a chance to better your English!】Thank you.