请大家帮帮我女儿，看看他写的小日记里有没有语法错误。哎，我这当妈的英语都扔了20年了。

Question

Today is a Sunday. It is very hot. My mother and I are goingto a bookshop. There are some books in the bookshop. I like interesting books. So I want to buy some interesting books. I like reading it. But after an hour. I am very tired and thirsty. Then, I am sitting on the chair. Mum ask me"What is the matter with you?" "I am very thirsty . I want some water." "Waht do you like? There is some water, some juice, some caffee and some tea on the table. What do you want?" "I want a bottle of juice. Because it is very sweet. " So my mother is giving buy a bottle of juice for me. I am very happy. I am drinking the juice.

谢谢大家了！

Answer 1

Today is a Sunday.(去掉a) It is very hot. My mother and I are goingto
（are goingto改成went,用过去式） a bookshop. There are some books in the bookshop. I like interesting books.
（该句改为 I like reading books或I'm interested in books) So I want to buy some interesting books. I like reading it.
(it改为them,不然文章前后不一致） But after an hour. I am very tired and thirsty. Then, I am sitting on the chair. Mum ask
（ask改为asked) me"What is the matter with you?" "I am very thirsty . I want some water." "Waht
(What) do you like? There is some water, some juice, some caffee and some tea on the table. What do you want?" "I want a bottle of juice. Because it is very sweet. " So my mother is giving buy（？is giving buy怎么两个动词，直接用bought就好了） a bottle of juice for me. I am very happy. I am drinking the juice.
日记的时态应该用一般过去式，文章时态错误。但小孩能写成这样已经不错了，句子整体的结构都很完整。

Answer 2

第一句去掉a
"So I want to buy some interesting books. I like reading it" 后一句将it 改为them
So my mother is giving buy a bottle of juice for me. I am very happy. I am drinking the juice.前一句和后一句没有必要用现在进行时，改为So my mother gives a bottle of juice for me(同时去掉buy);I drink the juice

Answer 3

Today is a Sunday. It is very hot. My mother and I are goingto a bookshop. There are some books in the bookshop. I like interesting books. So I want to buy some interesting books. I like reading it. But after an hour. I am very tired and thirsty. Then, I am sitting on the chair. Mum ask me"What is the matter with you?" "I am very thirsty . I want some water." "Waht do you like? There is some water, some juice, some caffee and some tea on the table. What do you want?" "I want a bottle of juice. Because it is very sweet. " So my mother is giving buy a bottle of juice for me. I am very happy. I am drinking the juice.
今天是星期日。这里实在很热。我和我妈妈去书店。书店里有一些书。我喜欢有趣的书。我想买一些有趣的书。我喜欢读它。但是一个小时后。我又累又渴。然后，我坐在椅子上。妈妈问我：“你怎么啦？”我很渴。我想要一些水。”“你喜欢什么？有一些水，果汁，咖啡桌上有一些茶。你想怎么样。我想要一瓶果汁。因为它很甜。”所以我妈妈给我买一瓶果汁。我很高兴。我喝果汁。
好像没什么大问题，只是有一点不顺。

Answer 4

你好，很高兴为您解答！ 作文写的很好，但略有不足之处，以下是我修改后的作文：

Today is Sunday. It is very hot. My mother and I are going to a bookshop. There are some books in the bookshop. I like interesting books. So I want to buy some interesting books. I like reading them. But after an hour. I was very tired and thirsty. Then, I sat on a chair. Mum askef me"What is the matter with you?" "I am very thirsty . I want some water." "Waht do you like? There is so me water, some juice, some caffee and some te a on the table. What do you want?" "I want a bottle of juice. Because it is very sweet. " Then my mother bought a bottle of juice for me. I was very happy and drank the juice.

Answer 5

“So my mother is giving buy”，你女儿想表达的意思是“因此我妈妈给我买了一瓶果汁”，最好改为“So my mother bought a bottle of juice for me”

Answer 6

Today issunday.It is very hot. My mother and I have go to a bookshop. How many bookes in the shop.I like intrested books.
so my mother give me a bottle of juice. i am drink it.
她的时态用的不对，乱用进行时