第1个回答 2013-06-05
everyone has his dream 主谓一致
the same 改成 it is the same 并列结构 主谓一致
freedom 改成free adj.
struggled 原文中拼写错了
lasted 改成 latest adj.最新的
there still a long way to go 改成 there is still a long way to go
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第2个回答 2013-06-05
As we all know,everyone has dreams.So it's the same to me .My dream is to become the president of China in the future,to make our country much more freer and stronger.
Over the 3 years,I have try to stick to my dream in many ways.For example,I insist to reading newspaper and televsion news to understand our country and society .It is really usefull for me to get such knowledge.Of cause,to make my dream come true,I have to study very hard everyday all the time ,especially in the futue.
Although it is a very hard and long road for me to achieve my dream,I will face any difficulties in my way bravely and confidently,and do what I can do to make it .As long as I believe it ,I will be a good president in a day.注意形容词的比较级,用词不要啰嗦,特别特别是你的卷面和字迹啊,祝高考顺利
第3个回答 2013-06-05
the same-----it is same;more freedom----more free;lasted news------lattest news;there still a long way ------there still BE a long way
有时一个单词从中拆开了。慢慢写。
第4个回答 2013-06-05
My Dream
It's true that everyone has a dream. My dream is to become the president of our country and make our country more powerful with better freedom.
I have been improving myself for the pass three years. For one thing, I have developed a habit of reading newspapers everyday, both local news and international news. This keeps me well informed and tells me what is happening in other countries. For another, I study hard and always keep a devoted heart for the country.
Of course, it is not easy for me to achieve the dream. There will be a long way to go. However, I will make more efforts and make myself qualified for the position. I believe that as long as I keep on, my dream will finally come true!本回答被提问者采纳