第1个回答 2013-07-11
一楼的不行，说的是大学生的暑假，明显是网上抄的，二楼的字数貌似不够，而且语言不正式，三楼的句式结构单一。考虑到你是初二的，所以我用了比较简单的词语，希望对你有所帮助~呵呵
My summer vacation plans
As summer vacation is coming near,and I plan to do a few things during my summer vacation.First ,I'm going to finish my homework.Second,I'm going to read some books I like,Finally,I'm going to visit some famous places with my good friends.
And I'm going to make good use of this summer vacation to relax and improve myself.本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2013-07-11
My summer vacation pians
My summer vacation is coming. I am going to Beijing for vacation.I am going in July.I am going with my friends.And I am satying for a week.I plan to have a very relaxing vacation.I am taking walks,going fishing,and going bick riding.I hope I can forget all my problems!...A great vacation!I can't wait!
第3个回答 2013-07-11
My summer vacation plans
At college, I missed my parents a lot. As the term was drawing to an end, I eagerly looked forward to going home. And I planned to do a thousand and one things during the vacation. Above all, I wanted to help my mother with housework. I also wished to read many hooks which my teachers had recommended.
However, at home, my mother would never let me do anything. She completely deprived me of sharing her work. As soon as I opened a book to read,she would sit down beside me and ask me about all kinds of things at the college. To please her,I told her one thing after another,and soon I forgot all about books. Even when I was actually reading,she would, now and then,insist that I should eat an egg or drink a cup of tea.
When I left home at the end of the vacation, not a thing in my plan had been carried out. But I felt very happy. I believed much more deeply than before in the old saying: Home, sweet home. There's no place like home!