呈现多表示一种持续的状态，而展现多是一次性的，并带有表演色彩。
I have a big family . There are five people in my family.They are my father my mother my grandparents and I. My father is very strict with me and my mother is very kind . I love them and they love me too. If I make progress, my father will say to me:"that's good! you are very well!" if I make no progress , my father will say to me:"Don't give up! ,we believe you!” and my father is a headmaster and my mother is a manager.
My grandparents were all teachers many years ago. I love them very much .
I am a student , I’m studying in Wuxi Chiway International school. I’m eleven years old now. I like playing computer games、reading English and watching TV .
Do you like my family?
l 具体释义：我有一个大家庭。有五个人在我的家庭。他们是我的爸爸我的妈妈我的祖父母和我。我父亲对我要求很严格,我妈妈是个非常善良的人。我爱他们,他们也爱我。如果我取得进步,我父亲会对我说:“这很好!你是很好!“如果我没有进步,我父亲就对我说:“不要放弃!,我们相信你!”,我的父亲是一个校长,我妈妈是一个经理。
l 我的祖父母都是老师多年前。我非常爱他们。
l 我是一个学生,我在无锡Chiway国际学校学习。我现在11岁。我喜欢玩电脑游戏,读英语和看电视。
l 你喜欢我的家人吗?