大家帮帮忙,把这个自我介绍翻译成英文

要求:翻译的单词不能太难,高中程度就行了。但句式要比较高级,不能像小学生那样什么I AM什么IT'S那样的。语句通顺,翻译通顺......没了,就要求那么多。翻译得好的话(就是需要更改的地方更改得好),再追加至少100分。
要翻译的内容如下:大家好,我叫XXX,就读于XXXX。很高兴得到这个与大家共事的机会。我优点不多(这句我觉得不恰当,可以适当更改),但我热爱学习,渴望与人交往。如果在工作的过程中犯下了错误,希望大家及时批评指正我。希望和大家相处愉快,谢谢各位。
我们才刚刚认识,却又要分离。X天的时间虽然短暂,但能得到教导和与各位成为朋友就具有无穷的意义(这句也不太恰当,可适当更改)。我很高兴能曾经与各位相处共事,这已成为我记忆中不可抹灭的一笔。谢谢大家的宽容和帮助!
1,2,3楼的,金山词霸也用的太明显了吧,4,5楼还行,不过可能不了解我们广东这边的情况。我不是毕业生,我只是高中生,是暑假去社会实践的。只需要实践两三天就行了,所以爱好那些没必要介绍。再改一下吧。

hello everyone, my name is XX and studing in XXXX. I am glad to have this oppotunity here to improve my social experience. I am a easy going person and like challenge, I think we could be good friend. I would try my best to do the work, if you found any problem in my work, please point it out without hesitation.
Thanks everyone.
Although we just know each other, I have to leave now. For this short period, I have learned much and get special experience from you guys, we are friends now, the experience here will be memorable things in my life. thanks for your understanding and help!
大家好, 我叫XX 在XXXX学习。我很高兴来到这里提高我自己的社会经历。我容易相处并喜爱挑战,我们能成为好朋友。我会尽力做好我的工作,但如果你们发现我工作中的任何问题,请及时指出,谢谢大家。
虽然我们刚刚认识,但我必须要走了,在这短暂的时刻,我从你们这里学到很多并得到很多经验。我们现在是朋友了。在这里的这段经历是一生难忘的。谢谢你们的理解和帮助。
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第1个回答  2009-07-22
Nice to meet you everyone!

My name is XXX,student of XXXX.

I'm so glad that I could have this opportunity working together with you.

自我介绍中最好是把自己擅长的介绍给大家,像兴趣、爱好之类。

“我优点不多”这一句改成:“我有很多兴趣爱好,比如:XXX... 我也热爱学习,渴望与人交往。”

I have a lot of interests,for example:XXX...

I also have deep love for study, thirst for associating with people.

If I made some mistakes in working process,I hope you would help me note the mistakes for correction promptly.

“谢谢大家的宽容和帮助!”放到这里。“希望和大家相处愉快,谢谢各位!”放到最后。

Thank you very much for your tolerance and help!

后面一段改成:虽然我们相处的时间并不长,但是能够得到大家的教导并和大家成为朋友,这对我而言具有非常重要的意义.这段经历将会成为我生命中宝贵的回忆.
希望能和大家相处的愉快,谢谢各位!

Although we will not work with each other for a long time, but I could obtain your guidance and make friends with all of you,it has very important meaning for me.

This experience will become my precious memory in my life.

I hope we'll get along with each other very well.

thank you so much everyone!

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自我介绍全文如下:

Nice to meet you everyone!

My name is XXX,student of XXXX.

I'm so glad that I could have this opportunity working together with you.

I have a lot of interests,for example:XXX...

I also have deep love for study, thirst for associating with people.

If I made some mistakes in working process,I hope you would help me note the mistakes for correction promptly.

Thank you very much for your tolerance and help!

Although we will not work with each other for a long time, but I could obtain your guidance and make friends with all of you,it has very important meaning for me.

This experience will become my precious memory in my life.

I hope we'll get along with each other very well.

thank you so much everyone!
第2个回答  2009-07-21
Hello, my name is XXX, enrolled in XXXX. I'm very happy to have the opportunity to work with you. I (the advantages of small, I don't think I could change), but I love learning, eager to communicate with people. If you work in the process of the mistakes committed, hope you correct my time. Hope and everyone happy, thank you.
We just know, but also to separate. X days though short, but can be taught and become friends with you have boundless senseI am very glad to work with you together, once it has become my memory cannot erase a pen. Thanks for the tolerance and help!
第3个回答  2009-07-21
Hello everyone, My name is XXX, a student at XXXX. Are very pleased to have this opportunity to work with you. I have the advantages of not, but I love learning, desire and human exchanges. If in the course of the work of the commission of a wrong, hope that in time my criticism. Would like to live a happy, Thank you very much.
We are only aware of, but should be separated. X-day, though short, can be taught and become friends with you very happy. I am pleased to have worked with you to get along, this has become my memory is not a indelible. Thank you for your tolerance and help!
第4个回答  2009-07-21
Hello, my name is xxx, a student at xxxx.Glad to get the chance to work with you.I do not have many merits (this sentence i think it inappropriate, can the appropriate changes), but i love learning, desire and people.If the course of the work of the mistakes, we hope that the timely humour me.Want happy members, thank you.
We just know, but also to separation.X days although short, but can get taught and became friends with Honourable Members have infinite implications (nor too appropriate, suitable change).I am glad to get along with fellow colleagues at work, this has become my memory is not a pen that.Thank you for your generosity and help!
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