帮我看看我自己写的这段英文语法对不对？求大神 Hello,friend,I'm glad to r

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帮我看看我自己写的这段英文语法对不对？求大神
Hello,friend,I'm glad to receive your order when I wake up,I know your country that is very rich,Now let us discuss business,you have take the order but no payment,If you are wondering what？Just tell me.In order to show my sincerity,we have packed the product and send a small gift for girl,Just waiting your payment,then I can deliver,Thanks！
Best Wishes!

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问题不少
weak up后面逗号改成句号
后面定语从句用法不对，country后面的that放到know后面
rich后面改句号
discuss后面加about our 直接discuss business会很奇怪 后面改句号
take改成taken
but后改成didn't pay for it句号
后面你是想说 有什么想知道的直接问我 吗 如果是这样的话 应该是 You can ask me anything that you want to know
后面send改成prepared
最后直接改成 Once you pay for the product, I will immediately deliver it.
结尾应是：
sincerely
xxx（你的名字或公司名追答

实话说 在这种比较正式的对话中那些“I weak up”可以省略 I know your country is very rich这句放在这里也很奇怪 其实没有这句话也没关系