我造的几个句子，可是不晓得对不对？可以麻烦大家看看吗？

Question

大家好，我的英文水平不是很高，所以我想试着将书上学到的新单词造句，以提高水平，但我不晓得以下几个句子是不是有误，可以麻烦大家指点吗？谢谢！

decide to to sth. 决定做某事

我所造的中文：我决定在三个月内使我的词汇量增加至四千字。
我再把它试着翻成英文：I decide to increase my vocabulary to four thousand words in three months.

take sth. to 带某物去

我所造的中文：我希望有一天可以带着相机环游世界。
我再把它试着翻成英文：One day, I hope that I can take a camera to travel around the world.

learn to do sth. 学习做某事

我所造的中文：经过这场教训，我学习做任何事前，先替其它人着想。
我再把它试着翻成英文：After this lecture, I learn to think about others before I will do anything.

know about 听说关于...事情；知道

我所造的中文：我知道蛋糕的制造过程。
我再把它试着翻成英文：I know about the making process of a cake.

at least 至少

我所造的中文：虽然实验失败了，但至少我们知道了该如何改进它的流程。
我再把它试着翻成英文：Although this experiment is failure, abut at least we know how to improve the process of it.

thank to 因为；多亏

我所造的中文：幸亏这台笔记型电脑，它使我更容易的查找资料。
我再把它试着翻成英文：Thank to this laptop, it makes me easy to do my homework.

※其实我原本想造的是下句，不过对我来说太抽象了，我翻不出来，如果有朋友会的话，也可以麻烦您教我好吗？谢谢！

幸亏爱迪生发明了灯泡，使世界充满了光明。
喔，我发现我打错了，不是查找资料，是做家庭作业，不好意思...

另外 abut 是笔误，没有前面那个 a

Answer 1

decide to to sth. 决定做某事

我所造的中文：我决定在三个月内使我的词汇量增加至四千字。
我再把它试着翻成英文：I decide to increase my vocabulary to four thousand words in three months.
==> decide是瞬间动词，不能用一般现在时，因为“决定”一下就完成了，所以用现在完成时，或者过去时也行。

take sth. to 带某物去

我所造的中文：我希望有一天可以带着相机环游世界。
我再把它试着翻成英文：One day, I hope that I can take a camera to travel around the world.
==>hope后面要用虚拟语气，所以，应该改成：
One day, I hope that I "could" take a camera to travel around the world.

learn to do sth. 学习做某事

我所造的中文：经过这场教训，我学习做任何事前，先替其它人着想。
我再把它试着翻成英文：After this lecture, I learn to think about others before I will do anything.
==> 1."教训"是lesson,"lecture"做名词讲的时候很少有教训的意思，建议修改。
2.为“他人着想”是：think for others,不能照汉语直译。
3.另外，同样注意时态，learn不能用现在时，应该用过去时，改成：
After this lesson, I "learned" to think "for" others before I "would" do anything.

know about 听说关于...事情；知道

我所造的中文：我知道蛋糕的制造过程。
我再把它试着翻成英文：I know about the making process of a cake.
==> 语法正确，但是比较生硬。

at least 至少

我所造的中文：虽然实验失败了，但至少我们知道了该如何改进它的流程。
我再把它试着翻成英文：Although this experiment is failure, but at least we know how to improve the process of it.
==>1.is是系动词，除非前后名词性质一样，一般接“系表”结构，即接表语(可作表语的形容词充当)。如I'm not you. He is a man. 这里experiment不是failure,应该直接用动词就行了。
2.know同样要注意时态。
3.Although和but只能用一个，因为它们都引导从句，同时存在就没有主句了。
句子改成：
Although this experiment failed/Although this experiment ended with failure, we know how to improve the process of it.

thank to 因为；多亏

我所造的中文：幸亏这台笔记型电脑，它使我更容易的查找资料。
我再把它试着翻成英文：Thank to this laptop, it makes me easy to do my homework.
==> make,let等动词后面的动词不定式一定要省略to.
句子改为：
Thank to this laptop, it makes me easier do my homework.

※其实我原本想造的是下句，不过对我来说太抽象了，我翻不出来，如果有朋友会的话，也可以麻烦您教我好吗？谢谢！

幸亏爱迪生发明了灯泡，使世界充满了光明。
Translation:
Thank to Edison's invention of electronic lamp(思维要严谨，是电灯泡）,it makes the world full of brightness.

Answer 2

我决定在三个月内使我的词汇量增加至四千字。I decide to increase my vocabulary to four thousand words in three months.

*I've decided to enlarge my vocabulary to 4000 within 3 months.

我希望有一天可以带着相机环游世界。One day, I hope that I can take a camera to travel around the world.

*I hope to take my camera to travel around the world someday.

经过这场教训，我学习做任何事前，先替其它人着想。After this lecture, I learn to think about others before I will do anything.

*After this lecture, I learn to think about others before I do anything.

我知道蛋糕的制造过程。I know about the making process of a cake.

*I know about the process of making cakes.

虽然实验失败了，但至少我们知道了该如何改进它的流程。Although this experiment is failure, abut at least we know how to improve the process of it.

*Although the experiments is failed, but at least we know how to improve the process.

幸亏这台笔记型电脑，它使我更容易的做家庭作业。Thank to this laptop, it makes me easy to do my homework.

*Thank to this laptop, I can finish my homework easily with it.

幸亏爱迪生发明了灯泡，使世界充满了光明。
*Thank to Edison's invention of lamp, it brightened the world.