下星期有外国学生到我校，以下是我想对他们说的话，请帮我修改病句。并帮我看一下我说的话好不好！

Question

Long long ago,I have dream about making friends with a foreigner.Now,my dream have come true.
When I grow up ,I think I will travel England,and bring something that Chana doesn't have to my homeland,then I will sale them,and then I will get a lot of money!I hope you can be my partner.
I really hope you can visit my hometown,and I will provide food to you,there are also a room you can live in.They are all be free!

Answer 1

先不说文章表达是否native 语法错误：
1，
最后一名明显BE是不需要的，
2 provide 后跟FOR 而不是TO，
3 there are a room ----there is
4 long long ago 用在这不合适
5 have cometrue -----has come true
6 travel 用做及物动词是游遍的意思，你这里的意思明显是想到England旅游，
7 china笔误
8 dream of

Answer 2

Long long ago,I have A dream OF making friends with a foreigner.Now,my dream HAS come true.
When I grow up ,I think I will travel TO England,and bring something that Chana doesn't have to my homeland,then I will sale them,and then I will get a lot of money!I hope you can be my partner.
I really hope you can visit my hometown,and I will provide food FOR you,there IS also a room you can live in.They are all free!

Answer 3

真短啊~~简单！
很久很久以前，我对与老外交朋友的梦想.现在，我的梦想已经成真。
当我长大了，我想我将前往英国，并把事情查纳没有我的祖国，那么我将出售它们，然后我将得到很多钱！我希望你能成为我的合作伙伴。
我真的希望你能访问我的故乡，我会向你提供食物，还有一个房间可以住.他们均是免费的！

病句：there are also a room you can live in
改错：去in

病句：and bring something that Chana doesn't have to my homeland
改错：我不太清楚你是什么意思，所以不会改。。。

嗯嗯。。写得还可以，如果你是初中生或小学生，那你就合格了。

1，
最后一名明显BE是不需要的，
2 provide 后跟FOR 而不是TO，
3 there are a room ----there is
4 long long ago 用在这不合适
5 have cometrue -----has come true
6 travel 用做及物动词是游遍的意思，你这里的意思明显是想到England旅游，
7 china笔误

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Answer 4

这完全不是口语，太正式了，写课本才这样说