请英语高手帮我修改并提供更好的表达方式，谢谢！

Question

Why I choose to attend college? I have been thinking about the question for a long time. Someone say that he will be getting a good salary and wonderful future without choosing to attend college. Many people who have never studied in the college are successful in their career and have happy life.
I am certain that I choose to attend college is not my parents’ wish. It is my choice. My parents have never forced me to do anything. They respect my decision because they wish me happiness on life.
I choose to attend college is not the reason for earning plenty of money in the future. Even if I graduate from the college I can not find the suitable job is one possibility. Lots of graduates take part in the Recruitment (/Open day/Open Interview) after another for looking for job. But most companies make some pointed references to be not accepting this year’s graduates. (But most companies need experienced people in stead of this year’s graduates).
I choose to attend college because I like the clear and beautiful school environment. We have some spare time to arrange other things. Every year summer vacation and winter vacation is coming. It is agreeable that we can have a good journey or read book at home.
I choose to attend college because of my major. It is my choice. I can learn many interesting knowledge of my major. I will improve my own culture and preparation for knowledge by studying.
I choose to attend college the reason is I can find a foothold somewhere without Certificate of Graduation (College Degree or above) in this society. The higher degree I get, the more choice I will have in the future.
Nowadays, I choose to attend college. I must doubly cherish time, hard study, arrange life carefully and realize my value of life before I graduate.

Answer 1

dandelion_ling -

我试帮你改了一下.只是把句子改得更象英文句子.但有几个地方你再加点.你很努力,也很认真.keep up the good job!

Why do I choose to attend college? I have been thinking about the question for a long time. Some people think that they will get good salaries and have wonderful futures without going to college. It is true there are those who have never studied in the college are quite successful in their careers and have happy lives. (这里你应该加几句反驳这种观点,因为你是觉得上学好的.)
It is not my parents’ idea to make me go to college. It is my choice. My parents have never forced me to do anything. They respect my decision because they wish me happiness in my life .
The reason I choose to attend college is not for earning plenty of money in the future. There is such a possibility that I won’t be able to find an idea job even if I graduate from the college. Lots of graduates take part in the Recruitment (/Open day/Open Interview) one after another looking for jobs. But most companies make it clear that they are not going to hire this year’s graduates. (Most companies prefer experienced people instead of graduates right from colleges).
I choose to attend college because I like the clear and beautiful school environment. We have some spare time to arrange other things. Every year during summer vacations and winter vacations, I can have a good time reading books at home.
Another reason why I choose to attend college is that I really like my major. It is my choice. I can learn many interesting things now. I will improve my own culture( 这里不知你指什么)and preparation for knowledge by studying.
The reason I choose to attend college is that I can find a foothold somewhere without Certificate of Graduation (College Degree or above) in this society. The higher education I get, the more choices I will have in the future.
Nowadays, I choose to attend college. I must cherish my time. I will work hard and plan my life well. I think my dream will come true one of these days.

Answer 2

这已经很好了!不错!