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    推荐答案   2017-05-29
    总体来说没有什么错误.went to 就是去的意思,visit 拜访也是去的意思,所以有点啰嗦,你直接把went to visit 改成visited 就行了,然后 His room was a little dirty 和 后面那句 so I cleaned the house on Saturday afternoon 是因果关系,所以你把so 前面的句号改成逗号,然后把so 小写,变成一个句子.还有乐器前面通常加定冠词the ,所以要改成played the guitar. on Saturday evening 等短语楼主没有用错.
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