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My holiday
This holiday ,I went to ShangHai with my family.It was so wonderful that I
could't forget.
We took a bus to Shanghai.The first day ,we visit the Bund.There are lots of wonderful tall buildings.I can see The Oriental Pearl Tower there.It's in PuXi,it'really high!
The second day ,we went to Century Park.
We went boating in the lake ,enjoying the beaty of nature.The wind was warm,like mother's hand.Then we went to see a film.That 's a happy day.
The third day ,we came back. My holiday is so great that Iwant to
go there again
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