1. I wanted badly to cry, however I remained cold and silent.
Key: I wanted badly to cry; however, I remained cold and silent.
I wanted badly to cry. However, I remained cold and silent
2. A lot of men today get their hair styled, they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
Key: A lot of men today get their hair styled, and they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
3. In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards passing them was not easy.
Key: In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards, for passing them was not easy.
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards because passing them was not easy.
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards. Passing them was not easy.
4. The Christmas party was dull, Jane and I left at 9:30.
Key: The Christmas party was dull, so Jane and I left at 9:30.
5. People are worried about the future, they are especially concerned about the economy.
Key: People are worried about the future, and they are especially concerned about the economy.
6. I got up at 7 a.m., then I went to school.
Key: I got up at 7 a.m., and then I went to school.
7. The projector(æ¾æ æº) broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed(ååºå¶å£°è¡¨ç¤ºä¸æ»¡), others shouted for a refund.
Key: When the projector broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed, and others shouted for a refund.
8. Cindy found the movie disappointing Lee thought it was wonderful.
Key: While Cindy found the movie disappointing, Lee thought it was wonderful.
Cindy found the movie disappointing while Lee thought it was wonderful.
1. Approaching the top of the mountain, a vast expanse of farmland could be seen.
---- Approaching the top of the mountain, we/ you can see a vast expanse of farmland.
2. Swimming at the lake, a rock cut Jimâs foot.
---- Swimming at the lake, Jim cut his foot on a rock.
---- When Jim was swimming at the lake, he cut his foot on a rock.
3. While eating my sandwich, five mosquitoes(èå) bit me.
---- While I was eating my sandwich, five mosquitoes bit me.
---- While eating my sandwich, I was bitten by five mosquitoes.
4. To join the team, a C average or better is necessary.
---- To join the team, you must have a C average or better.
---- For you to join the team, a C average or better is necessary.