写作思路：作文开头一句话概括说明上海，然后介绍东方明珠以及黄浦江等，结尾表达自己对上海的感受。
正文：
Shanghai is an international city ,which has attracted so many foreigners from all over the world.
翻译：上海是一个国际城市，吸引了来自世界各地的外国人。
There are many beautiful places such as the oriental pearl TV tower, Huangpu River and so on.
翻译：有许多美丽的地方，如东方明珠电视塔，黄浦江等。
Of these places of interest, the oriental pearl TV tower is so attractive that none has left Shanghai without visiting it .
翻译：在这些名胜古迹中，东方明珠电视塔非常吸引人，没有一个人离开上海而不去参观它。
It is so tall that all the visitors have to go upstairs by elevators. The view from the top of the tower is very grand especially at night .
翻译：它非常高，所有的参观者都得乘电梯上楼。从塔顶望去，景色非常壮观，尤其是在晚上。
Besides this ,enjoying the beautiful view on a ship by the Huangpu River is very exciting . The beautiful lights from the tall buildings along the river make the river a so beautiful place.
翻译：除此之外，在黄浦江边的船上欣赏美丽的景色是非常令人兴奋的。沿河高楼发出的美丽灯光使这条河成为一个如此美丽的地方。
During the river tour we can also see the outer part of the oriental pearl TV tower. Also there is much delicous food, such as Nanxiang small steamed bun ,pan-fried steamed bun and so on.
翻译：在河游览期间，我们还可以看到东方明珠电视塔的外部。还有很多美味的食物，比如南翔小馒头、油炸馒头等等。
Thedelicious food make many visitors mouth water . All in all ,Shanghai is a place worth visiting many times.
翻译：美味的食物使许多游客垂涎三尺。总之，上海是一个值得多次游览的地方。
描写上海的英语作文：
i have been to many interesting places.but i love shanghai best.last summer,i went to shanghai for vacation.shanghai is a very beautiful city.there are many tall buildings,cars,amusement parks and people in shanghai.
i had been to a big amusement park,it was very interesting!and i had a good time in the amusement park.i had been to a space museum,it was very great.and i also went shopping in shanghai.i would like to go to shanghai again.
译文
我去过很多有趣的地方。但我最喜欢上海。去年夏天，我去上海度假。上海是一个非常美丽的城市。上海有许多高楼、汽车、游乐园和人。
我去过一个大的游乐园，非常有趣！我在游乐园玩得很开心。我去过一个太空博物馆，它非常棒。我还去了上海购物。我想再次去上海。
本回答被网友采纳It is the largest economic and trade centre in the country and acomprehensive industrial base。 It is an open city along the coast， as well as a famoushistorical and cultural city。 Shanghai's history of revolution andculture attract tourists home and abroad。 Being regarded as "Paris of China" and as the paradise for shopping， Shanghai has become an idealcity for tourism。
The Pudong Development Area in Shanghai is an important specialeconomic zone in China。 Efforts are being made to develop Shanghai into a modern international economic， financial and trade centre。
Welcome to visit Beijing and Shanghai！
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