请问I'm very glad to be your classmate ，I hope I ca

Question

请问I'm very glad to be your classmate ，I hope I can make friends with you all the best.
这样表达是否正确，有没有语法上的错误

Answer 1

I'm very glad to be your classmate ，I hope I can make friends with you all the best.
我很高兴成为你的同学，我希望我能和你成为最好的朋友。
I am so happy to be your classmate. I hope I can be your best friend.

Answer 2

I hope I can be your best friend.会更好一点吗？