求达人帮忙把这段话翻译成英文

Question

随着近年来城市现代化水平的不断提高，作为人们消费和娱乐以及其他各种社会功用的的人员密集场所的数量和规模不断增加，对我们社会的经济繁荣，人民的物质生活的丰富起到了很大的推动作用，也同时丰富了人民的文化生活。但每洒下一缕阳光，也就投下了一片阴影——人员密集场所的重大恶性灾害事故频繁发生。这对人民的生命财产安全造成了较大影响，并且会造成很恶劣的社会影响，社会各个阶层都对人员密集场所的安全状况予以高度的关注。
安全是宜人性的最低要求，如果连安全都无法保障，是没有宜人性可言的。在保障了安全性之后更进一步追求场所的宜人性、人性化是很有必要的。人员密集场所如果能够满足宜人的条件，将提高身处其中的人民群众的生活质量，并且可以提高在人员密集场所工作的人员的工作效率，缓解工作压力，进而促进经济的发展与社会的稳定和谐。
本文通过对人员密集场所特性的调查和分析，剖析了人员密集场所常见的安全隐患和不符合宜人标准的设备设施，并由此结合了安全人机工程学的知识建立了人员密集场所安全指标体系，指出了研究实例人员密集场所不符合宜人标准之处，并提出了改进意见。
不急，但是要有翻译质量
谷歌翻译就免了吧，那个我也会……

Answer 1

随着近年来城市现代化水平的不断提高，作为人们消费和娱乐以及其他各种社会功用的的人员密集场所的数量和规模不断增加，对我们社会的经济繁荣，人民的物质生活的丰富起到了很大的推动作用，也同时丰富了人民的文化生活。但每洒下一缕阳光，也就投下了一片阴影——人员密集场所的重大恶性灾害事故频繁发生。这对人民的生命财产安全造成了较大影响，并且会造成很恶劣的社会影响，社会各个阶层都对人员密集场所的安全状况予以高度的关注。
As modernization and urbanization pick up pace in recent years, the number and size of mass-gathering places,which serve as centres of consumption, entertainment and other social functions, have been on the rise,promoting our economy as well as enriching people’s material life. However, just as there is a shadow behind every ray of sunshine, so the occurrence of severe accidents in mass-gathering places has increased. This has significant impact on the safety of the people and their property,as well as causing negative social impact. People from all walks of life should pay particular attention to mass-gathering places.
安全是宜人性的最低要求，如果连安全都无法保障，是没有宜人性可言的。在保障了安全性之后更进一步追求场所的宜人性、人性化是很有必要的。人员密集场所如果能够满足宜人的条件，将提高身处其中的人民群众的生活质量，并且可以提高在人员密集场所工作的人员的工作效率，缓解工作压力，进而促进经济的发展与社会的稳定和谐。
Safety is the minimum criterion of humanibility, which refers to the suitability of a place for people to gather. A place that is not safe cannot be said to have humanibility. It is paramount that we only start talking about humanibility after we have ensured safety. Mass-gathering places,once they have met the criteria of humanibility, will improve the quality of life of people who live in these places, increase efficiency of people who work in these places, and reduce pressure of work, hence promoting the development of the economy as well as social stability.
本文通过对人员密集场所特性的调查和分析，剖析了人员密集场所常见的安全隐患和不符合宜人标准的设备设施，并由此结合了安全人机工程学的知识建立了人员密集场所安全指标体系，指出了研究实例人员密集场所不符合宜人标准之处，并提出了改进意见。
This paper researches about and analyses the characteristics of mass-gathering places, and points out the safety issues and unsuitable equipment at these places. By combining the knowledge of safety engineering,this paper establishes a safety indicator system, exposes the areas that require improvement, and proposes suggestions to improve these areas.

自己翻译的，大意没错，希望答案对你有用。

Answer 2

译文：
With the constant improvement of the city's modernization level in recent years, consume as people and amusing and other quantity and scale of the intensive place of personnel of different social functions are increasing constantly, to the economic prosperity of our society, the abundance of the people's material life plays a very big role, enriched people's culture life at the same time too. But shed the next wisp of sunshine each time, just throw down a scene of shade --Personnel's great malignant calamity accident in the intensive place frequently happens. These has caused greater influence on the people's safety of life and property, and will cause very abominable social influence, each stratum of the society gives the high-level concern to the security state of personnel's intensive place.

It is a pleasant minimum exigency to be safe, if even safe unable guarantee, it is not pleasant at all. Go still one step further to pursue the place pleasantly after ensuring security, humanization is very necessary. If personnel's intensive place can meet the pleasant condition, will improve the life quality of the people in the situation, and can improve the working efficiency of personnel working in personnel's intensive place, relieve working pressure, and then it is harmonious to promote the economic development and stability of society.

This text and analyzes, have dissected the common potential safety hazard of personnel's intensive place and not accorded with pleasant and standard apparatus facilities through the survey of intensive place characteristics of personnel, and has set up the safe index system in personnel's intensive place in knowledge of combining safe man-machine engineering from this, have pointed out that it doesn't accord with the pleasant and standard place to study embodiment personnel's intensive place, have put forward the suggestion of improving.
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Answer 3

As in recent years, increasing levels of urban modernization, consumption and entertainment, as one, and other various social functions of the staff-intensive areas the number and size Buduan increasing economic prosperity of our society, people's material life played a Feng Fu major role in promoting, at the same time enriching the cultural life of the people. However, each shed a ray of sunshine, also cast a shadow over - crowded places of major disasters and accidents frequent malignant. This is the people's lives and property caused great impact and cause a very bad influence in society, all levels of society are all crowded places to be a high degree of security concerns.

Security is the minimum requirement of a pleasant nature, if even security could not protect, is not pleasant to speak of the. After the protection of the security establishment to further pursue the pleasant nature of humanity is necessary. Crowded places pleasant if they can meet the conditions, which will improve the people living in the quality of life, and in crowded places can improve the staff's efficiency, ease the work pressure, in order to promote economic development and social stability and harmony .

Based on the personnel-intensive areas of investigation and analysis features, analyzes the crowded places common security risks and can not be pleasant standard equipment and facilities, and thus combines the knowledge of the security set up ergonomic workplace safety indicator system personnel-intensive , points out examples of crowded places do not meet the standard between pleasant and made improvements.

Answer 4

As the level of urban modernization in recent years, the continuous improvement of people's consumption and entertainment as well as other various social functions of the crowded places in the number and size of growing economic prosperity of our society, rich people's material life played a major role in promoting, at the same time enriching the cultural life of the people. However, each shed a ray of sunshine, also cast a shadow over - crowded places of major disasters and accidents frequent malignant. This is the people's lives and property caused great impact and cause a very bad influence in society, all levels of society are all crowded places to be a high degree of security concerns.
Security is the minimum requirement of a pleasant nature, if even security could not protect, is not pleasant to speak of the. After the protection of the security establishment to further pursue the pleasant nature of humanity is necessary. Crowded places if we can meet the pleasant Tiaojian, will increase the masses of the people themselves have the quality of life and can improve personnel who work Miji work place efficiency, ease the work pressure, and thus promote economic development and social stability and harmony .
Based on the personnel-intensive areas of investigation and analysis features, analyzes the crowded places common security risks and can not be pleasant standard equipment and facilities, and thus combines the knowledge of the security set up ergonomic workplace safety indicator system personnel-intensive , points out examples of crowded places do not meet the standard between pleasant and made improvements.