英文简历（帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误）

Question

1 .To manipulate the word, and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get a good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability

Answer 1

1. 建议改成：Good at manipulating WORD/EXEL/POWERPOINT and other Microsoft Office applications.
原因：to do（动词不定式）一般表示即将。。的状态，我觉得这里你要表明的是“已经熟练掌握。。。”，用good at （精于）更好，还有微软Office软件的Word、Excel和PPT都是应用程序applications不是software

2. 建议改成：I am able to adapt to new things soon and work as a good team player.
原因：什么什么的能力不一定都要用have ability来表述，自学能力强建议用“很快适应新的环境、东西”来表述，比纯粹讲自学能力强更好，团队合作能力力，work as a good team player是很多欧美公司地道的讲法

3. 建议改成：I've learnt good communication skills and organizational capacity from the School Clubs' activities.
原因：communication skills就是人际沟通能力或技巧的意思，从。。。中学得、获得用learn from比较好，建议这样改，另外学校各倶乐部的活动用activities取代job更符合英语的表达方式。

希望对你有所帮助！

Answer 2

写简历是最好不要在句子里出现第一人称的主语，这样会给人一种过于主观的感觉。

建议：
1.having the skills in Microsoft Office software such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel,etc.
2.having strong self-learning ability and team cooperation ability.
3.having got good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability through the school club job cultivation.

Answer 3

i can operate Powerpoint, Excell, Word, and other office softwares.

Besides, i am good at self learning and team cooperation. in addition, people believe i have amazing organizational ability and interpersonal communication skills.  

is this a portion of your college essay? GOOD LUCK!! ( if it is a college essay, i think it's kinda vague. be detailed. give specific examples in real life to explain why you are such a talented and skillful person. stop using general words like : good , nice, kind. these words are too well spoken, and they have lost their meanings already)  

  English can be stylish!

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参考资料：i'm the all-known new yorker

Answer 4

1. very familiar with using WORD,EXCEL,PPT and other office software
2. strong capabilty of self-learning and a good team player
3. from the experience of club management at school, i'm also a good organizer skilled at communication with people

Answer 5

第一句没有谓语。。单单用to不行
第二句 可以
第三句改为：in the job cultivation when i was member of school clubs

Answer 6

1 .To manipulate the word，Powerpoint and Excel,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability。