求英语面试自我介绍

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请大家帮忙写一篇英语面试自我介绍吧
我需要写的简单情况：非常荣幸能够有机会向您介绍我自己，我出生于XX省，在2002年进入XX大学，主修会计学专业，在学校期间，学习方面，获得过学校奖学金，并取得英语四级、计算机二级证书。在学校工作方面，任学生会某部门副部长，在这期间负责组织了多项活动，并取得圆满成功。
2006年七月开始，在XX银行公司业务部工作，但是因为自己的女朋友工作在XX城市，所以在2007年4月份，离开我的第一份工作，到上海来继续我的职业生涯，希望可以找到份与以前工作类似的，看到贵行的招聘后，认为自己可以胜任此职务，望给予机会，谢谢！

Answer 1

Extremely is honored can have the opportunity to you to introduce I, Iare born to XX province, enters XX university in 2002, majors in theaccounting specialty, in school period, the study aspect, has obtainedthe school scholarship, and obtains English four level, the computertwo levels of certificates. In the school work aspect, is appointedstudent association some department vice-minister, in this period wasresponsible to organize many activities, and obtained the completesuccess. In July, 2006 starts, in XX bank corporate business department work,but because own girlfriend work in XX city, therefore in April, 2007,leaves my first work, continues my professional profession toShanghai, hoped was allowed to find the share and before workedsimilar, after saw your firm the employment advertise, thought oneselfcould be competent this duty, looked gives the opportunity, thank you very much!
希望我的答案对你来说有帮助.
你自己看看吧!
"××"是某某.
加油.希望你能够找到一份好工作噢!

Answer 2

自己再改改可能有不对的地方
Very honored to have the opportunity to tell myself, I was born at the XX province, in 2002 entered the University of XX, majoring in accounting professions, in schools, learning, schools have won scholarships and the four English, two computer certificates. In schools, students in certain departments of the deputy minister, during which the organization responsible for a number of activities, and successful. In July 2006, in the banking business XX Department, But because his girlfriend in XX city, in April 2007. leave my first job, came to Shanghai to continue my career, hoping to find work with previous similar, see your recruiting trip after that they can do this job, look for opportunities, Thank you very much!

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