英语语法,哪些句子有错误?怎么改?最好的句子是哪一句话,为什么?

1,Many goods online have quality problems.
2,Many things on tne Internet have quality problems.
3,the quality problem of a greatmany bargains exists.
4,The goods online may be with plenty of quality problems.
5,Many things online have problems in quality.
6,things online ofen have quality issues.

第1个回答  2011-09-30
1.第一句在保持其本身特色的条件下最佳方案应该为Many on-line goods have quality problems.(on-line作后置定语勉强可以算行,但是不如说on-line goods好)
2.此句没错。
3.词句在保留自身特色时应该为There exists quality problems in a great many bargains.或者是The quality problems exists in a great many bargains.
4.此句应该为The on-line goods might have plenty of quality problems.
5.Many on-line goods/commodities(网上的“东西”不说things) have quality problems(problems in quality也行,但是不地道).
6.Things on-line often have quality problems.(issue在这里不合适,还是应该用problem)
最好的“一句”是改正过的Many on-line goods have quality problems以及第二句。这两句都是很好的。
第2个回答  2011-09-29
1. 可以这么说,不算错
2. 正确,无可挑剔
3. 语法错误,逻辑错误,思维混乱,不知所云
4. 可以这么说,但不够好,最好说 may have plenty.......
5. 正确
6. 我认为是不小心,少输入词了,应该是 Many things online often have quality issues. 所以也正确。
第3个回答  2011-09-28
1. 错,因为online 是一个形容词,不是副词。
2. 对。
3. 错。语言顺序不对,没人这么说话。而且,bargain是特价商品的意思。
4. 错。道理同1。
5. 错。道理同1。
6. 错。online 错,issue 错。issue 常常指有争议的问题。追问

不好意思,我想再问一下:第1,3,6怎么改??

追答

1. Mnay goods on the Internet have quality problems.
3. The quality problem with a great many goods does exist. (这种句型,在此处最好强调;不
强调就用exists. 不过,有点别扭。)
6. Things bought on the Internet often have quality problems.

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第4个回答  2011-09-28
没看出哪一句有语法上的问题,可我个人喜欢第一句,简捷易懂。
第5个回答  2011-09-29

好容易啊.................................当我没说——
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