第1个回答 2007-10-09
Hello
May I take the opportunity to introduce myself?My name is ...
I’m 21 years old ,
My major is E-commerce.
Althought I a fresh graduate,
I have a lot of working experience in my college.
Most of the work i took was to be sales .
This is the reason why I choose this job.
Although I do not quite understand this area,
I can handle things with great care and passion.
More importantly, I can manage it under pressure and I am always kind to others.
Your kind consideration is appreciated
That’s all.
Finally, thank you for giving me this interview opportunities.
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第2个回答 2007-10-17
你好
Hello, (个人感觉用Good afternoon或Good morning比较好点~)
很高兴能自我介绍
I am glad to introduce myself.
我21岁,我的专业是电子商务
I'm 21 years old and my speciality is E-commerce.
虽然我刚毕业,但我已经有许多工作经验,并且之前的工作几乎都关于销售
Althought I graduated just now, I've a lot of experience already and the jobs before were almost about selling.
这就是我为什么选择这个职业
This is the reason why I chose this Jobs
虽然现在我对它的知识有限(个人不建议用LZ的原句,感觉自揭短处了,还是说的保守一点的好吧)但我工作很努力、认真
Now I am limited to it but I work very hard and earnest.
最重要的是,在任何逆境中我仍能努力工作
The best one is that I can still do my best in any adverse circumstances.
我很随和,我希望能和这的人做朋友
And I am very amiable, I hope I can make friends with all of people here.
谢谢(个人感觉不需要重复第一句话)
Thank you.
而且你的自我介绍是口语,不需要那么书面化,不要把句子拉的太长,不然感觉有点拖泥带水,说话不是写作文,不需要太讲究的。
第3个回答 2007-10-14
Helle
I am pleased to introduce myself..
I’m 21 years old .
My college major was E-commerce.
Althought I a fresh graduates.
But I have a lot of working experience in my college.
Most of the work undertaken by the sales
This is the reason I have chosen for this Jobs
Although I know really a little about this industry
But I handle things with great care and passion.
What's more, I can work under pressure and I am always kind to others.
Your kind consideration is appreciated
That’s all.
Finally, thank you for giving me the opportunity to attend this interview.
完全人工改的哦..
第4个回答 2007-10-09
thank you for give me this interview opportunities
opportunity不用加复数吧