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我有个大家族,而且我在家族里辈份很大,当我十八岁那年,我已经是姑妈级别的了

i have a big family。

我爷爷有一个哥哥,他有几个堂兄妹,我就不知道了。
my grandfather have a old brother and i don't knowhe has How cousins from his father's side 。
爷爷有五个,三男二女。
my grandfather have five childen,three man and two woman.

他们都成家了
they have theirs faminly。
而对于爷爷奶奶来说,多了两个女婿和三个媳妇。

grandfather and grandmother have Two son-in-law and three daughter-in-law 。
我爸爸排行老大,我爸有两个孩子,一个是我一个是我弟。
my father is big, he has two childen my young brother and i.
二叔有三个女儿一个儿子。我们是堂兄妹关系
my second uncle has three dauthgers and one son,we are Cousins relationship;
三叔只有一个女儿,
my third uncle has one dauthger.
大姑也有三个儿子,他们非常调皮,可爱。

my first paternal aunt have three som,they are naughty and troublesome.

二姑只有一个儿子,他自小由奶奶带,所以就跟我们住一起了,我这个表弟非常懂事,乖巧,而且长得非常帅气,如果平时我早上晚起,他都会来敲我的们叫我起来叫早饭,平时要是带他出去玩的话,他总是边唱边跳,仿佛整个世界都是他的舞台,非常讨人喜欢。
my second paternal aunt have a son,he lives with my grandmother so we live together,my cousin is clerver intelligent boy and he is good looking.
he calls me have breakfast when i sleeping later.
my cousin with me togher go to shoping ,he always Sing and dance walk As if the world is his stage , Very likable。

帮我看看,是不是有什么错的地方,或者语法有错,帮我指出,并改正,谢谢。

【1】have a old brother ————an
【2】 i don't know he has How cousins from his father's side ----------i do not know how many cousins from his father's side does he have
【3】my grandfather have five childen,three man and two woman-------has sons daughters
【4】they have theirs faminly--------they all have their own families
【5】grandfather and grandmother have Two son-in-law and three daughter-in-law -------这个应该加复数吧?我忘记怎么加了
【6】my father is big, he has two childen my young brother and i.-----my fathe is older ,he has two childen contain my young brother and I
【7】we are Cousins relationship------we are Cousins in relationship
【8】my second paternal aunt have a son------has
【9】my cousin is clerver intelligent boy and he is good looking.-------- a clerve
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第1个回答  2011-12-29
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