一篇英文日记，请大家多多指教

Question

It‘s a boring day.work at 8:30 in the morning, scan some mails,call some telephone,and write a report. It was time to have lunch.After have a rest for a while ,going on afternoon work.And so so.There is nothing important.终于到了五点，赶快走人。
无聊的一天，8:30上班，看看邮件，打了几个电话，写了一份报告。很快就到中午吃饭的时间了。休息了一会儿继续下午的工作。

Answer 1

首先是过去发生的事，所以要用过去时态。

It was a boring day that started work at 830 in the morning, scaned some mails, called some telephone, and wrote a report.

It was very soon to reach the lunch time. After I had a rest for awhile, countinued to do the afternoon's work. The work was just so so, nothing important really. Finally, it was 5 o'clock, I just wanted to go home quickly.

这个是按照你写的重写了一遍，你看一下。

Answer 2

work at 8:30 改成I worked at 8:30
scan改成scaned
call改成called
write改成wrote
After have a rest 的have改成having
going on 改成I went on
There is nothing important改成There was nothing important追问

After have a rest 的have为什么不改成had

追答

After 是介词,介词后面跟名词性的词作状语.介词后面不能加动词性质的词

追问

终于到了五点，赶快走人
这句该怎么说?

追答

It was 5 o'clock finally and i hurried up to leave.