写作思路:确立中心,围绕选材,确定重点,安排详略,选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想,选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料,以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来,具体范文如下:
My favourite fruit is apple. It's red and round. It looks very beautiful and lovely.
我最喜欢的水果是苹果。它又红又圆。看起来很漂亮、很可爱。
When eaten, it is sweet and crunchy. Very delicious. I like to eat apples when I was very small.
吃的时候,又甜又脆。很好吃。在我很小的时候我就喜欢吃苹果了。
As I got older, I liked it even more. Because apple sounds like peace in Chinese.
长大点后,我更加喜欢了。因为苹果的汉语发音跟平安很像。
I want everyone to be safe all the time, not like my grandmother.
我希望每个人都能够一直平平安安的,不像我外婆。
My grandmother's death made me sad. After that, I have a special love for apples.
外婆的去世让我很伤心。之后我对苹果就有了特别的喜爱。